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White Comet


Just a guy who loves cars, boats, planes, and basically anything with an engine. Oh, and I write stories about pastel-coloured horses and stuff.

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  • 11 weeks
    A few updates + something new

    I haven't checked in in a while so thought I'd just throw in a blog post to update you guys on where things are at.

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    1 comments · 59 views
  • 13 weeks
    TTT Chapter 5 update

    It WAS going well...but then I managed to break my arm today. :twilightangry2:

    I was at work working on something while up on scaffolding. I asked my colleague on a platform above me to pass me some equipment down, I told him to just chuck it. He warned me that it was quite heavy, I replied with "Nah it's not, just chuck it. I'll be fine."

    ...Needless to say I was wrong. :rainbowlaugh:

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    4 comments · 42 views
  • 15 weeks
    TTT Chapter 4 update

    It's just a few words shy of being done! :twilightsmile:

    Unfortunately it's a little shorter than I was hoping, coming in somewhere around the 3000 words mark give or take. Honestly I had a bit of trouble finding inspiration for this chapter without getting repetitive.

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    2 comments · 28 views
  • 19 weeks
    TTT Chapter 3 Update 2


    White Comet writing Through Thick And Thin - 2020, colourised.

    Chapter 3 is complete! :rainbowkiss:

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  • 21 weeks
    TTT Chapter 3 update

    Aight so it's about halfway done, but I had a phone call from work today saying that we've been given the green light to start up again on Monday. And I've got plenty to catch up on, so I'll probably be doing a hell of a lot of overtime indefinitely (Hey, at least it compensates for having to take a few weeks unpaid!)

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Apr
10th
2020

Through Thick and Thin chapter 2 update · 9:06pm April 10th

Chapter 2 is almost complete. It currently sits at 10,000 words and counting. I've got 1 more scene to finish writing then I'll do my normal pre-reading / spell-checking and it will be uploaded. Can't say exactly when, but I expect it to be some point by Monday/Tuesday at the very latest.

Boy, being stuck indoors off work thanks to the Coronavirus sure has given me plenty of time to write, I could get used to this... (although I don't think my liver could, it's probably reacting something like this atm :rainbowlaugh: )

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Comments ( 2 )

The good thing is that we will not have to wait that long xd, just take your time and so that the quality does not fail, a question can you give me advice when writing a story about this ship or writing a story in general? greetings from Mexico.

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I still consider myself to be learning also, so I wouldn't consider my advice the best, but I'll try...

One thing I learned when writing Wonderbolts Trials And Tribulations is not to just wing it with a general idea. It's best to plan a story from start to finish before starting to write. Or at least get most of the way there. I'm around 80% complete with the planning for Through Thick and Thin.

With regards to shipping...I can't think of anything SoarinDash specific, but I guess make sure the pacing is correct. What I mean by that is be realistic. IRL, it's rarely love at first sight is it? There needs to be build-up and interaction as the characters come to realize their feelings.

That's all I got right now :twilightblush:

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