Chapter 18: Pain Part 1 AE · 1:10am Feb 11th, 2020
Hey guys! I just wanted to let you all know I’ve read all your comments from the Chapter I posted today. I know I got mixed reactions, some said they pefered the original version, others perfer the alternative one.
I’m guessing you guys are wondering where I am going with this now. So I’ve decided that I’m going to use the alternative version instead and go from there. As many said, it opens more doors for character development. Especially with Luna, Chrysalis and Sunset, and I feel it would work better for future chapters.
I’m hoping you all can understand why I’ve changed this, I want this story to be the best it can be, and with the feedback I get from you all I do try my best to take from it to make this story better. I really appreciate all the comments and the help you guys give me. I hope you all can support me on this decision and that you won’t be too mad at me if you didn’t want me to change it! I hope you will still continue to read it anyway! Thanks again to all who love and support my story it’s mean a lot! And I’ll see you all for the next chapter!
I'm fine with that.
I'm good with that
Reading 18a my heart did jump when the twist happened..
Looking forward to seeing where you go from here.
Eyup I'm right you were in the fence on which story to go from there. Hehehehe. In the end, you are the judge and executioner of this story
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Thank you for all your feedback guys I really appreciate it!!
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Yeah I definitely was. Although I think it will get better from here. I think this will open up more doors for Sunset, Luna and Chrysalis to become even more close.