Jan
11th
2020
Updates and revisions · 1:41pm Jan 11th, 2020
I think I mentioned this in my last blog post about revising the story. Not to worry, though, they're only small and will not require you to re-read the story.
Everything will be low-key, such as streamlining some scenes, tweaking details here and there, and just otherwise making the foreshadowing more relevant to what I've got planned.
To give you guys a taste of what is in store,, the story's description has been trimmed down by half, and I'm glad to say that it gives the same 'oomph' the original did, without the extra detail. Chapters One through to Three have also been re-uploaded, and the rest will follow suit as they're completed.
Enjoy!
You say that but I'm going to do it anyway just to brush up on the story
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If you're going to do that, it might be an idea to wait until after the revisions. Then you'll be able to read the more refined version!
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Well yes, that's my intent.