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Alcatraz


Come with me, and you'll be, in a world of pony procreation...

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  • 57 weeks
    Alright alright alright...

    OK, some long overdue explanations are necessary.

    First off, how 'bout that Rona, eh?

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    7 comments · 435 views
  • 71 weeks
    Repeat information ch 21 and 22

    Chapter 22, the most recent, was chopped up from leftover information from ch21, which lead there to be a repeat of a couple scenes that exist on both chapters. I've done and fixed it, hopefully at least. If there's any double-ups in information in either chapter, point it out and I'll remedy it whenever I've got the spare time.

    0 comments · 160 views
  • 72 weeks
    It's finally done

    One year to the day, chapter 22 has finally been published.

    I'm just glad I don't have to keep you guys waiting any longer.

    Next chapter is in progress, and it will have some art to go along with it. Stay tuned!

    1 comments · 203 views
  • 78 weeks
    More unforeseen circumstances

    Don't worry, it's a good thing this time, I promise.

    Greenback, my faithful and stellar editor for the last couple years, mentioned that, the further we get into the revisions, there's less and less that actually needs fixing/changing.

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    1 comments · 230 views
  • 80 weeks
    Updates and revisions

    I think I mentioned this in my last blog post about revising the story. Not to worry, though, they're only small and will not require you to re-read the story.

    Everything will be low-key, such as streamlining some scenes, tweaking details here and there, and just otherwise making the foreshadowing more relevant to what I've got planned.

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    4 comments · 211 views
Jan
11th
2020

Updates and revisions · 1:41pm Jan 11th, 2020

I think I mentioned this in my last blog post about revising the story. Not to worry, though, they're only small and will not require you to re-read the story.

Everything will be low-key, such as streamlining some scenes, tweaking details here and there, and just otherwise making the foreshadowing more relevant to what I've got planned.

To give you guys a taste of what is in store,, the story's description has been trimmed down by half, and I'm glad to say that it gives the same 'oomph' the original did, without the extra detail. Chapters One through to Three have also been re-uploaded, and the rest will follow suit as they're completed.

Enjoy!

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Comments ( 4 )

will not require you to re-read the story

You say that but I'm going to do it anyway just to brush up on the story :twilightsmile:

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If you're going to do that, it might be an idea to wait until after the revisions. Then you'll be able to read the more refined version!

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Well yes, that's my intent.

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