Huh, and after all this time, I thought I was clever
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Well in the end, good thing the challenge wasn't too challenging after all. If it was, you guys wouldn't be able to get this sneak peek:) Did you guys have fun or was that little challenge completely silly and pointless?XD Let meThe Wife of the Old Draconequus Re-writes · 6:00am Nov 4th, 2019
Hey guys, my wonderful readers and followers!^^ Sooooooo, here's the thing lol, I've decided to rewrite some parts of The Wife of the Old Draconequus
I know, I know, I know what all of you must be thinking: "What?!:0 Why?! There has been nothing but positive reviews and comments from us! We love it! Why are you changing it?!" And let me just say, I cannot tell you how much I appreciate and love each and every one of you^^ <3 Your support in this story means the world to me and I deeply appreciate the positive feedback:) 
But recently, I have made my first attempt to submit this story to Equestria Daily and try to have it featured/advertised on Equestria Daily. You actually have to go through a process where you have someone at Equestria Daily read your story and see if it can be featured on Equestria Daily or not. Unfornately, The Wife of the Old Draconequus failed and didn't get the chance to be featured. Now, this doesn't mean that I can't submit my story again and essentially try again. Probably will once I'm later down the story/later down the line essentially:) The reader said that they liked my story and saw talent in the writing. But their biggest critique is to make this story as different as possible from the original AMB story as possible. They do want me to try again once I've further into my story:) Anyway, these rewrites will make this story more distinct from the AMB story, but also not too terrible different from what was there before originally. Essentially, I will be rewriting/extending/adding more to the ending of Chapter 2, rewriting half of Chapter 3, and rewriting half of Chapter 4.
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I am so sorry for this inconvenience everyone:( This is why I haven't said anything about Chapter 5 for awhile and I know that you guys have been looking forward to Chapter 5. These rewrites did effect what I had drafted for Chapter 5 and I had to do some rewrites to Chapter 5. So yes, in other words, you guys will see the rewrites first before Chapter 5. Plus, you guys need to read Chapters 2, 3, and 4, newly edited, before you read Chapter 5.
I know this a lot to ask from all of you, but I have a feeling that these rewrites will help this story in the long run:) But, not only do I need each and every one of you to read these rewrites, but once these rewrites are posted, I would need you guys to leave me a comment on how you guys liked the rewrites:) These comments will let me know if I need to do more rewrites or not. And more rewrites will affect the release and the writing that will go into Chapter 5. If you guys can do this, I would be forever grateful <3 I will let you guys know when the rewrites are posted:)
Thank you for being awesome and enjoy this funny picture, as well as, video about the joys and woes of fanfic writing^^! Lol!
Well Missy, I'm quite sure I'll enjoy it just as much as I enjoyed the original version.
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You should watch Hazbin Hotel, aka the greatest adult animated show on YouTube to date. And yes, I can send nutty pics if I want. XD
It’s okay I do enjoy this
I don't know how to feel about this.
So you are rewriting the story so it can feature on Equestria Daily? Sure, if this is the goal you were aiming for in this story, go for it. But I would say just write what you want to write. I think making the story less like the original AMB takes away what made the original special. This IS an adaptation of the original story but with MLP characters and settings, and you have done a wonderful job in combining the two worlds and making it stand out, with it being unique, but also readable to people who know the original source material.
I would not change anything, because the story is already great in my opinion, who cares if it's too similar to the original source, isn't that the point of an adaptation? But hey, it is your story by the end of the day, so do what you wish is best. Again, I would say "Screw Equestria Daily, write what you want," but it what you want by the end of the day.
I guess a few changes I can see, this just my speculation, is cutting out all the original creatures from EMB and only use ones from the MLP verse? I don't know, we'll wait and see. Best of luck to you.
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Daww thanks ponybird21, but still just in case, keep your fingers crossed lolXD
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Oh don't worry, trust me, I've seen Hazbin Hotel & I love it^^ <3 XD! My favorite characters are Charlie and Alastor <3 Which characters are your favorite?:) I love the canon ship that is Vaggie x Charlie, BUT I also love my beautiful crack ship that is Alastor x CharlieXD Lol! Do you have a Hazbin Hotel ship?;)
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Hell yes let us fangirl briefly! XD
I too support the crack ship Alastor and Charlie, despite how much I love Charlie and Vaggie, and my fav character is my beautiful snek demon gentleman, Sir Pentious.
He is beauty, he is grace, unlike me he is NOT a big disgrace. He has sass, class, and a great ass.
And I ship him with my own character. XD so that's my life with Hazbin.
And I got my entire school addicted to it and the teachers are concerned. XD
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Oh no no, that is not the goal of this story at all!:0 Oh dear, I should have specified this in my blog post!:0 No, the goal of my story is to have a loving fan story to, not only Fluttercord itself, but to the anime and manga that is Ancient Magus Bride <3 I love this story and it's dedication to AMB, and I have so much faith in this story, that I want to share it on Equestria Daily and hope that it could land on there. But if it can't, like if it can never get on there, that's okay:) I will still love this story no matter what <3! I just want to try again just to see if I can:) I just want to try because well why not?XD It's something I've never done before and I've always wanted to try. I see it more as a side goal for this story; it doesn't have to be done and it doesn't have to be approved by Equestria Daily in order to successful in my eyes. It would be great if it did happen, kinda like a cherry on top of the sundae kind of feeling:) But again, it doesn't have to happen and I just want to try to see if it is possible because I'm curious.
I'm taking their critique of my story into consideration because they brought up some good points about my story and I feel like that critique could improve it. Don't worry, at the end of the day, I'm still in that mentality that "this is my story and I'll write it the way I want it to be":) This story will still continue down that path no matter what, but I still want to improve on it in anyway that I can:) If the rewrites end up just not working at all for the readers, then I'll go back to the original no problem because I do love the original and the rewrites I have:) Each version has something to offer for different reasons.
I will make sure to put this in the blog post above so that way everyone can understand where I'm coming from. I didn't explain this particular part well.
Good point, I will make sure to put in more MLP fanstasy creatures rather than AMB magical creatures so that way it feels more like an MLP adaption:) Thank you for this wonderful critique^^
But most importantly, thank you so much for these kind words:
I cannot tell you how much it made me smiling reading just how much you love and appreciate and care about my story <3 This is truly the goal of any writer out there and thank you for such amazing support <3
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Haha lol yes we shall;) Ahem, AHHHH!XD
Victory, yes!:D
Well there you go, the ultimate ship really;) Less ship wars that way, no one gets hurt, and you can write all the fanfiction and draw all the fan art about it as much as you want;) Truly, it's the only way to ship really;) Lol!
Haha lol oh goshXD!
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XD AHHHH
Ah yes, sweet victory. Whenever I see the family portraits people draw of Charlie, alastor, and their fannon child I'm like SQUEEEEE!!!
Ah yes, I do write stories with these two, but I'm terrible at fanart, and trying to find people who are willing to do it for free because I'm a broke ass child. XD help.
Yep. Teachers hate me now. But hey, you gotta smile!
I bring you... Joy.5150831
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Same here, I love all the fan art for Al x Charlie:D <3 It's soooooo good, it's what got me shipping these twoXD Thank you fan art;) Lol! Though I wish there was just as much Vaggie x Charlie art out there as there is for Al x Charlie
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Le gasp!:0 Squeee thank you:3! <3
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Haha I'm glad you love the joy I brought you. And I know I'm like pls help.
Hey what do you think of Angel Dust x Husk? I recently got into it and SQUEE
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I can see why people ship Angel x Husk, or just any Angel ship really cause well, AngelXD Lol! But Angel x Husk or Angel x Al is not my ship, but not against anyone who ships these two ships or any ship for Hazbin really:)
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I became a hardcore fan of Angel and Husk, but I can't get used to Angel and Al. At all.
And then there's sir pentious...
And he deserves a lady, but I'm a hoe so I don't want him to be with anyone. xD