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Sanguine Blade


Writer on Fanfiction.net looking for inspiration and enjoyment.

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  • 154 weeks
    MAKING IT OFFICIAL

    Hello to my loyal fans. I know some of you are wondering what has happened and I think its time I explained.

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  • 204 weeks
    Fanbase survery

    hey everybody. So recently I've been having a lot of different ideas, but I'm not sure if you want them. The reason being that they are all anime based and i don't know if ya'll like that. So, I decided to post here some of the basic ideas and see which ya'll would like.

    Idea one: My little Pony Tsunotori

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  • 205 weeks
    Update and Question for the Fans

    Hey everyone,

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  • 206 weeks
    On the Future of H-44

    Hey everyone its Sanguine Blade,

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  • 211 weeks
    Question for future stuff

    Do you want a with a hero main character or a villain main character?Option c is Anti hero/Vigilante

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Nov
3rd
2019

Preview Displaced: Enter Majin Kase(Kaa- Say) · 12:23am Nov 3rd, 2019

It has been 1000 years since the imprisonment of Nightmare Moon. Luna has returned, the nations of the world at peace across the known world. With the elements now having chosen their bearers, the world was abuzz. Such powerful artifacts are not simply ignored by all as Equestrians would think. That power would spark one to return, and see these new heroes for himself...


The main six had been called by Celestia to face a new threat. A magical being known as Discord had broken loose. Now they were searching through a maze for the Elements that they had lost. Rainbow Dash, element of Loyalty, was walking through the maze by herself.

"Come out Discord! Fight like a mare!" She called out in frustration.

"Oh but am I really the problem?" Discord said materializing in front of RD.

"Please once I take you out, the elements will eb easy to find." RD replied.

"But what about Cloudsdale?" Discord smirked showing an image of Cloudsdale being destroyed.

"NO! Mom! DAD!" RD called looking into the mirage Discord had made.

"All you have to do is take your wings to help them." Discord responded, and with a flash of light, The wings of RD were in front of her. Se slowly started reaching for the wings with her eyes swirling like a hypno wheel.

WHAM! Came the sound of a strong punch as Discord was clocked in the side of the face by a blur of Red.

"What the-" Discord said before being punched again by a creature RD had never seen before. The being was a tall, muscular biped with tight pants, and a belt holding them up with two canisters on it. A simple White Gi with a black weave shirt underneath. A pair of gloves with no cover for the digits finished the outfit.

"Hey Dissy. Wow you really are still predictable." The being said giving a smirk. Discord growled in a predatory way that surprised RD. Discord had never acted serious around anyone form their short encounter, but this being was an exception.

"You. I thought the princesses exiled you. Why couldn't I SENSE YOU!" Discord shouted.

"Traveled out of the place after a while. You really are behind the times on events after your sealing. Still you didn't seem to learn." The being said getting into a stance. " Time to put you in a time out." He continued motioning for Discord to strike first.


Do you think this could be fun with some tweeks? Let me know in the comments below Cuz I really want to get this story off the ground.

Comments ( 5 )

...Hold up, how will you balance the character? DBZ characters tend to be very powerful.

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Well I will be adding new villains that are made to balance and old villains will be tweaked. For example chrysalis and Sombra would be more crafty rather than outright brawlers. Tirek can stay the way he is and I may bring in other things such as Daybreaker, nightmare rarity and others. Sombra in this is the weakest but I will be working on balance.

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Yea, Tirek and Twilight were capable of large beams of magic, that's kind of above Raditz and under saiyan saga Vegeta.

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AS for when Chryssi comes and beats celestia. MY reasoning for that defeat is that if Celestia uses over 15 percent, her body will radiate increasing heat to the point where at 100 percent, would be like standing next to the sun. Luna is the opposite in that at 100 percent, her body would emit a field of no atmosphere like the space that surrounds the moon. Her crown and necklace also help gather the excess energy her body radiates, bringing her power with all her inhibitors on means she uses 1 percent power.

Im questioning what relation he should have to the princesses friend? cousin(adopted cousin)? childhood Coltfreind? Arranged marriage of Celestia or Luna? What you think?

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