Techie's SPICY Smokin' Toasted Self-Roasted Reviews #16: [The Incredible Tail of Fluttershy/Raritoots]!

Yech. It's this story. Well, I suppose since I'm going through each story I've ever posted 'round here, I'd eventually have to get around to this.

TThe Incredible Tail of Fluttershy / Raritoots

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Random

Not too long after the Buckball game, everyone realizes that Fluttershy's tail pretty much has a mind of it's own. All the while, Rarity's gone partying with a Pinkie clone.

• Fluttershy
• Pinkie
• Rarity

TheMajorTechie · 1.3k words  ·  9  2 · 648 views

It's... weird, short to say. I don't think I need to even comb through the chapters. The story is so pointless that the two chapters together hardly tell anything.

First chapter is about Fluttershy's prehensile tail. Nothing interesting really happens.

Second chapter is about Rarity eating a bean cupcake. Nothing happens and the chapter ends with a fart joke. It's boring like the first chapter.

Honestly, I don't even remember why I wrote this story at all.

It's not even funny. It's just randomness and then a fart joke.

Comments

[Zapper Frost]

So the story is just as pointless as this story review?

[TheMajorTechie]

5141307
Yup

[Herald of Opera]

It's just randomness and then a fart joke.

Why did you say the same thing twice?

[TheMajorTechie]

5141344
Idk