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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

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Oct
13th
2019

Add a tag? · 12:06am Oct 13th, 2019

Should I add a comedy tag to my story?

TRarity's Colt
Rarity, among others across the land, signed up to be foster parents for foals after numerous disasters struck the nation. Few expected to be called upon, among the least was Rarity.
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Comments ( 5 )

Don't know. Guess I'll read it now to tell ya.

5136895
So much to do in it still, but I'll get there. 🐸

5137045
I've got 2 chapters left. I find the drama element a lot stronger than the comedy, but I don't find the dirty jokes as funny as some may. Still, in my opinion it's a drama with some jokes, comedic elements maybe, rather than something structured to be funny, if you know what I mean?

5137260
I totally do. Thank you for your input!

5137290
That last chapter was the most comedic of the bunch, mainly due to Pinkie. If you have a lot more chapters like that in the future, a comedy tag might be warranted.

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