Daring Doubt (Review) · 2:16am Aug 24th, 2019
Ah, well, even though I saw Tara Strong and Greg Cipes at FanExpo today, I'll do this...
LP: 8000
Hmm... this is either a betrayal of secrets, a plot to bring Daring Do down, or Rainbow's going over the top again.
-No damage.
*Sighs* more whining critics that can do nothing but bitch all the time. There's a difference between Criticism and being a jerk.
"You're as much of a fake as Daring Do." (Jerk)
Only coming to bitch rather than the actual signing (Double jerk)
-500 for being jerks where I don't approve. (And yeah, I know, this riffing I'm doing is"Jerk" too. If that's all people understand or do, that's all I'm going to give them)
LP: 8000 -----> 7500
A huh... plot to bring Daring Do down it is. Cliche, but I see nothing too wrong.
No damage
Despite this being a plot to bring Daring Do down, Rainbow gets penalized for jumping the gun and not listening to both sides, as well as thinking everything said is a lie without bothering to get evidence.
-500
LP: 7500 -----> 7000
*Sniff Sniff* I smell a rivalry coming...
...or maybe not.
-No damage.
There Rainbow goes again, jumping the gun and making assumptions without getting evidence first (She's as trigger-happy as I portrayed her in Starfleet Season 2)
-200
LP: 7000 -----> 6800
"Have you ever tried just talking to them?"
UGH!! Ridiculous...
-500
LP: 6800 -----> 6300
Fluttershy being blinded by her own kindness (Her greatest strength is also her weakness)
-200
LP: 6300 -----> 6100
"Stone and Magic, not alive"
I approve, big time, reminds me of how a lot of the MOTWs I make in Starfleet are also not truly alive, but just objects cursed by magic. (It is what it is, and there is no difference "You're Lazy" or "They know how to do it better") Nope, it is what it is... (Period)
-No damage.
Fluttershy actually has a good point for once, and like I said, her kindness is her weakness but her strength as well.
-No damage.
*Sighs* Despite his alibi, I think this creature is pathetic... and the friendship thrown in with it.
...Blech!!
-500
LP: 6100 -----> 5600
Despite the high score, I find this ep ridiculous.
FINAL SCORE: 5600
TBF, a lot of people do give honest criticism of your fics, like how X is,, in essence, artistic license to Y fact, or mispelling/plotholes, etc