Director's Cut: Don't Go In, Twilight! · 8:28pm Jul 12th, 2019
This was a funny story idea I came up with to play with Twilight's phobia with quesadillas, and, from a few comments, I might've dropped the ball a little bit in the final chapter of my "Twilight's Bookless Book (Celestia Help Us!!)" so I wanted a do-over of sorts about a story with Twilight's neurotic side. From how the "Don't Go In, Twilight!" story's done up to this point, from a like-dislike ratio, and the number of likes period, it seemed like I did better with this story, if not much better.
The toughest part for me in this story was to "sell" that Eric wasn't talking about quesadillas but something else completely that he wanted to hide from Twilight so bad.
Honestly I think all your work involving Eric from the very beginning is very well done. I genuinely liked the content you put in them. The likes and dislikes may just be from people reading the series in reverse. I didn’t necessarily read the series in order. I started with the BSBFFs and LBBFF and went backwards from there before I went back to reading all the others in order after BSBFFs and LBBFF.
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I'm real glad to hear that. For the most part, I try to write the stories as self-contained stories, or at least similar to how the episodes in the actual show each season are, so no one will feel like they have to read them in a certain order and can just pick what they'll like to see.
The main exception is the "WAY Too Many Marefriends, And Girlfriends(?)" story which was a direct sequel to the "Too Many Marefriends (And wives)" story