Jun
24th
2019
Intent doesn't always meet hopes or expectations · 12:16am Jun 24th, 2019
I’ve recently updated a new story, the intent was to take advantage of RPG setting to have the readers sort of play along with deciding how things go, I even stated this few times in the author’s notes a few times with my phrasing things like it was a sort of game. But only 2 readers have actually shown an active in this sort of approach, I’m kind of disappointed more readers aren’t taking advantage of this sort of thing. Yes, the story is Mature, but when I put it to a poll, for of the different ideas I had bouncing around, that’s what the majority rule said. Here’s to hoping more readers decide to pick up being players moving forward
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dracone · 219 views
· Story: Adventures in Eroquestria
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#Reader Involvement
#stories that don't quite follow through on hopes
I’m joy it so do you read my last comment last night?
5078978
Yep, but your rolls were a bit too low
5078979
What wrong with those two? BTW I still need to type in my last roll for rainbow dash group in just moment ok.
5078984
The rolls were too low, there was nothing I would say was wrong with the suggestions themselves
I personally just don't care for it not having Spike as the main character since he's my favorite MLP character.
5078998
Everyone has their preferences. The story that comes after Adventures in Eroquestria will have Fluttershy and Applejack as the main characters then the story after that will have Spike one of the main characters, at least that’s how I have it planned out currently.
5079001
I'll keep an eye out for the Spike one then.
5079028
Might be a while, the current one just barely started and whole other story will have to run its course before the Spike one even begins to pop up
5078985
So do you got my last comment for rainbow dash group from last night right?
5079206
yep
5079219
What do you think? Do you liked it?
5079220
It was okay, I might use pieces of your comments in the most recent chapter for an upcoming chapter
5079222
Which one?
5079227
yes
5079247
I said which one?
5079252
I might just take pieces of each
5079255
Ok...are u starting with my 13 roll first?
5079259
Won’t say
5079292
Ok
Sorry, i couldnt live up to your expectations. Ive never played a tabletop rpg, so i dont really understand the whole dice roll mechanic thing.
I´m more into functional magic, like, comming up with rules for how a certain spell or item works, and what Logical consequences there are. Like, how the alicorn amulet increases your power, and lets you cast spells, you havent learnt yet, as Long as its creator knew them (Trixie hadnt learnt to teleport yet in that Episode), but it takes your sanity in Exchange, and Maybe shorten your lifespan.
For example PlieRow666 posted a Suggestion of a beast amulet in the comments of the story, that can transform you into any animal: How About the restriction, that the Transformation is random, and lasts a random number of turns? Like, you might turn into a powerful dragoness, but you also might turn into a breezie? And if you turn into a large creature, while youre inside… Imagine Fluttershy accidentally smothering the entire Party with her chest in dragonform. And if Rainbow tries it, she will naturally get the breezie form...
5079758
It’s fine, just posted a new chapter a half hour or so ago