Feedback, this is what it's all about. This is what (hopefully) makes us better writers.

So in light of said feedback, I've decided to take down and revise the latest chapter of the story into something that's hopefully a bit better than before. To be honest, I wasn't sure exactly how to go about this chapter, and was afraid it wouldn't sit well with some people, but I pressed on anyway because... well... this is how the story goes.

I'm not changing the ultimate outcome of the chapter—that's something that needs to happen—but I am addressing some concerns, one of which I had already meant to, but completely forgot, and changed the path towards that outcome, so hopefully it'll go over a bit better. The chapter will be put back up once I'm done, so here's hoping you guys are looking forward to something better (and here's hoping I can deliver).

Comments

[Carbon]

Yea,sure. I dont want Weaklestia again.

[Venerable Ro]

Anything worth doing is worth doing right, eh?

[Gastredner]

To be honest, while Celestia was acting somewhat stupid, her behaviour was completely understandable from her perspective. Sure, she might have knowingly made a deal with the devil eldritch abomination, but from her point of view, the threat from the Dead Goddess would appear bigger—after all, her pet did bring death and destruction over part of her kingdom, while the spectre in the mirror didn't do anything to actually hurt anyone (as far as she knows). If that is what the "controversy" was about, that is.

Still, I'll be eagerly waiting for the updated version.