Rewrite · 5:19am Nov 29th, 2018
ancient twilight is hands down my best story, and it's gotten me lots of readers. But, great as it's doing I've been told of a problem with the writing.
this is the first actual constructive criticism I've gotten, and I have to take it into account, criticism is hard to handle sometimes, but it's necessary to improve.
I'm going to be teaming up with my editor to fix the writing mistake, the story will be swapping form first person view, to the third person, this should help with immersion into the story, and while we are at it, we may hammer it into something respecting a good tale.
the current plan is to get one chapter rewritten per month, but we may get more or less done depending on our schedules. I'll do my best to change the chapters titles to 'rewritten' as we go, if anyone has problems with the story thus far, let me know. I'll take that into consideration.
I'm sorry I couldn't do the nightmare war like I was planning on December, as this marks the one year anniversary of when I posted the first chapter.
Going to recommend marking with chapters have been and which havnet been edited as well as mention the story is under a rewrite on the story itself so people who don't see this blog will know.
Even though you didn't bring a Nightmare arc to commemorate one year anniversary, giving your story a new breath of life is a gift good enough.