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demonbaker


just a brony who got started in the fandom with grimdark

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  • 8 weeks
    Some updates about Ancient Twilight.

    This is continued from updates on section three

    About Ancient Twilight.

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  • 8 weeks
    Some updates about section three.

    So, since it's been so long since I've explained anything, I can understand how people will assume stories have been dropped.

    My writing is largely based on mood, and I also have other issues that I'm working through but I won't go into here, but here's some updates:

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  • 35 weeks
    Q&A For section three.

    The latest chapter of Section Three is done. I ended it a bit early because I wanted to do a Q&A thing.

    So, when I write stories, I try my best to not hold the hand of the reader. I don't usually outright explain things even if they do have an explanation.

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  • 79 weeks
    Rewrite

    ancient twilight is hands down my best story, and it's gotten me lots of readers. But, great as it's doing I've been told of a problem with the writing.


    this is the first actual constructive criticism I've gotten, and I have to take it into account, criticism is hard to handle sometimes, but it's necessary to improve.

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  • 116 weeks
    late chapters

    as I progress further and further into my story, I run into more snags and walls. I know where I want the story to go, but writing how to get there in a clear and concise manner is getting hard.


    I'm really just having a hard time explaining concepts in the story, each interaction goes through several hiccups before they get ironed out.

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Apr
6th
2020

Some updates about section three. · 8:18pm April 6th

So, since it's been so long since I've explained anything, I can understand how people will assume stories have been dropped.

My writing is largely based on mood, and I also have other issues that I'm working through but I won't go into here, but here's some updates:

Section Three is nearly finished. I've got 90% of one chapter, and 60% of the final chapter finished. I'm planning on releasing these both at the same time, but one may be a bit delayed after the first. all serious events have been written, the rest is editing, and maybe some small amount of rewording to make things flow better.

it's a downside that you're uploading things one chapter at a time, instead of a completed book. if you want to go back and sprinkle more hints about something in the story, you can't.

I knew how this was going to play out, just not how I was going to get there, and ideas came to me rather late that I wanted to add-in as well.

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Comments ( 2 )

Perhaps you could go back and rewrite chapters to have the foreshadowing implemented? Maybe filler chapters to appease my insatiable desire for more to be written? :3

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it happened to match up with things that have already been written. It may seem sudden, but it doesn't contradict anything written before.

but, I did think about editing chapters to show more, but I think I laid enough groundwork in the two I'm working on for it to work.

tho, I think I may need to flesh things out a bit more, my writing seems rushed, I'm not giving many things room to breathe.

maybe that's just something I have to improve on.

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