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demonbaker


just a brony who got started in the fandom with grimdark

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  • 110 weeks
    decided to make a patreon.

    this is a shameless post about me making my first ever patreon account. I'm still working on the rewards and whatnot, but it's mainly a way to force me to write. when I feel like I owe people something, I'm guaranteed to do it.


    so, yea. here. maybe the monkeys need a raise. I might be able to give them two bananas a month now.


    https://www.patreon.com/Demonbaker

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  • 122 weeks
    Soon

    Soon.

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  • 198 weeks
    Don't read this.

    really, don't read this. I'm venting after having a bad day and removing a friend from my life.

    this is not good for me. and will tank people's views of me.

    don't read further.

    Nobody had a good childhood, everyone has issues. Some people were beaten, abused.

    I was not.

    I was abandoned.

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  • 211 weeks
    Some updates about Ancient Twilight.

    This is continued from updates on section three

    About Ancient Twilight.

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  • 211 weeks
    Some updates about section three.

    So, since it's been so long since I've explained anything, I can understand how people will assume stories have been dropped.

    My writing is largely based on mood, and I also have other issues that I'm working through but I won't go into here, but here's some updates:

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Apr
6th
2020

Some updates about section three. · 8:18pm Apr 6th, 2020

So, since it's been so long since I've explained anything, I can understand how people will assume stories have been dropped.

My writing is largely based on mood, and I also have other issues that I'm working through but I won't go into here, but here's some updates:

Section Three is nearly finished. I've got 90% of one chapter, and 60% of the final chapter finished. I'm planning on releasing these both at the same time, but one may be a bit delayed after the first. all serious events have been written, the rest is editing, and maybe some small amount of rewording to make things flow better.

it's a downside that you're uploading things one chapter at a time, instead of a completed book. if you want to go back and sprinkle more hints about something in the story, you can't.

I knew how this was going to play out, just not how I was going to get there, and ideas came to me rather late that I wanted to add-in as well.

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Perhaps you could go back and rewrite chapters to have the foreshadowing implemented? Maybe filler chapters to appease my insatiable desire for more to be written? :3

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it happened to match up with things that have already been written. It may seem sudden, but it doesn't contradict anything written before.

but, I did think about editing chapters to show more, but I think I laid enough groundwork in the two I'm working on for it to work.

tho, I think I may need to flesh things out a bit more, my writing seems rushed, I'm not giving many things room to breathe.

maybe that's just something I have to improve on.

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