What the Frick re-write

So, i was sitting in physics class and suddenly was struck with inspiration! It’s about (you guessed it) what the frick “my” most popular story. (If you know the irl history of the story those quotes will make sense.) So I’m now going to re-write it! If you would like to contribute, then I could use volunteers for editing. (Ill message you once a chapter is ready via google drive) and maybe a cover art.
I’m planning on upping the quality by crazy. The old version will still exist here until the new one is presentable. I will then move the old story to my DA, because of this site’s rules.
Message me for editor status.
Now... what should I call the new one...?

Comments

[Gargon94]

This is a good idea. I liked reading the old story. How do you feel about using other people's OCs in your stories?

[Golden_Reflection]

possible names (separated by a semi-colon): Lul wut?; an unexpected change; exclamation of (family friendly) surprise!; this can’t be happenstance, can it?

[Cool writer]

4963388
I'm not opposed to it, it mostly boils down to: can I justify their existence from a narrative sense. Did you have someone in mind?

[Gargon94]

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Well, I have a changeling hive that is friendly to non-changelings. It's called the Shadow Hive Kingdom. You could make up either a normal Shadowling OC or a pony-Shadowling hybrid OC who lives in Ponyville.