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Darth Severus


Brony, Star Wars nut, Former Marine, BA in English, minor in creative writing, OCD and on the Autistic Spectrum

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  • 1 week
    Help w/Next Chapters

    So, the next two chapters in the tagged story will be Spike playing cards with some of the corrupt members of the Equestrian Navy. Only problem, I know nothing about poker. In the end, Spike and his crewmates win the game, take the money from the corrupt officers, and have them hauled back to Equestria to face trial for their crimes. Like I said, I know very little about poker. If anyone is

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  • 4 weeks
    My Family is Suffering, Please Make it Stop God

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  • 4 weeks
    God Bless The Broken Road

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  • 6 weeks
    Recovering from a Heart Attack and Dehydration

    So, yesterday, I spent half the day in the emergency room for a mild heart attack. Don't worry, I'm doing fine, and if anything happens, they told me to come back. I did have to call an Uber to get home because my mom hates driving at night. But all in all, I just wanted to let you guys know I'm alright. Doctor said to get plenty of rest, and drink more water, since dehydration is what caused the

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  • 6 weeks
    My First Joint

    So, a few weeks ago I mentioned that I was going to try to use delta-9 hemp products to try to work with my writer's block. It didn't help with my writer's block per-say, but it gave me a very creative high. You know those little grey things you see when you close your eyes, and they move around as you move your eyes? It was kind of like that on steroids, and as I closed my eyes, I saw all sorts

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2018

Content for Next Chapter · 4:47pm Oct 31st, 2018

Ok, so I'm getting ready to write the next chapter for The Pirate Prince, and I'd like to know what content you want to see. I want to choose between Spike revealing his identity to his crew, or Spike's crew going after Finn. If you have other ideas on what you'd like to see, feel free to suggest them. I actually forgot to add the fox girl from An Eye for an Eye, A Hand for a Hand to Spike's crew, but I'll do that soon enough.

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Comments ( 7 )

Spike revealing his identity, i think that it could be funny.

Either revealing his identity, getting intimate with Adagio (or Zecora) or deciding what ship to buy would be interesting.

Down the road in the story, a tense confrontation with the Pinafore crew would be also good to read. One that erupts into a fierce fight that inadvertently exposes Spike as the prince they have been searching for.

4961313
Yeah, I was planning on Spike getting intimate with one of them, and even though it's not tagged as porn, Spike is going to form a bit of a harem with his female crew members.

4961371
Cool to hear.

How do you think Celestia will feel when she learns that her son will practically have a harem?

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Point taken, she won't react well

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Most likely not but it would be very interesting to see.

Could have while they're chasing down Finn, they get attack by Lyra and Bon Bon, two of Celestia secret agents. Which lead Spike to explain who he is to them. Celestia could have a tracking device/spell place on Spike which help Lyra and Bon Bon find him and bring him back.

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