More Chapters coming · 11:26pm Oct 2nd, 2018
So the revamped and updated versions of Chapters 17, 18 AND 19 are up and ready to be consumed. Also, the newest chapter of This Nose will be released shortly.
I'm actually pleased with how Bean's trip to Ponyville turned out in 17 and 18. Let me know what you think, and hopefully I'll have Chapter 20 ready to go soon.
Oh cool :)
Define revamped.
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Cleaned up some awkward phrases and tried to change some tell sections to show, but the core plot remains the same. It's basically what happens when an editor goes through and points out my mistakes. (I tried to self edit for too long. I really needed professional help.) :)