Pardon the bit of dust · 2:40am Aug 6th, 2018
Hello Everypony, ScarFox here,
Recently, I came to the realization that my stories have a number of goofs in them. From spelling errors, to grammatical errors, spacing issues, to even worse, continuity errors, and even timeline errors! The time has now come for me to comb through my stories, and FIX these problems!
For example, in "Battleship Express", Major Don can't seem to decide if he's 23, or 25! Was Major Jeff Coleson killed in Nebraska, or Sue Falls, South Dakota? Why does Leopard seemingly have 2 different backstories in "Battleship Express", and "Beyond the Express"? Was Sally Face a Commander, or just a corporal? The time has come to FINALLY set the records straight, and FINALLY clean up my stories!
I'm starting with "Battleship Express", and then I'll fix "Fear from the Rails", and then "Beyond the Express" once it's complete here before too long. Tonight, "Battleship Express" will begin to undergo the corrections, but don't worry, NO chapters will be taken down, and EVERYTHING will still be readable!
I hope that you all understand, and I invite you to read through "Battleship Express" after tonight, (At least the first couple of chapters!) and see the new changes!
Thank you,
ScarFox
Cool, good luck my friend
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Thanks.
Ive read stories with worse grammer but it doesnt matter so long as the central story and messages shine through regardless
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Well, it's not terrible, but yet parts aren't good either. I need to fix it, as well as the continuity errors. I NEED to keep a straight timeline, and now that I have one, it's time to go back and fix the problems.
tell me when the full matence is done and i'll re-read the whole thing!
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It'll take a little while. I've already re-worked the Prologue and Chapter 1, and am now on Chapter 2.
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I can wait