My Own Reality status update · 6:55am Jun 25th, 2018
Revised and partially rewrote the first chapter, and began work on the second chapter.
Starting from the second chapter, additional plot elements not present in Pony-Me have been added for additional realism concerning the effects of the transition between an extended session of virtual reality and real life.
Chapter-by-chapter status:
"Wake up" is now on its second draft.
"Take a look around" is currently being written, and is on its first draft.
Once I finish the first draft of the second chapter, I'll post it all again in another blog. 
EDIT: I plan to try and double down on the feels and overall tone of the story as well. Stripping away MLP as the base material means I've got to work much harder in fleshing out a background lore than I have in quite a while. In fact, this is the first time in YEARS that I've used multiple drafts in writing. Usually, I just write once, and toss an editing pass over it and call it done.
