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Phoenix Nebula


Chaos is not the opposite of Harmony but apart of it. Both chaos and order together create a balance known as Harmony. Without one you cannot have have the other and without either there is nothing.

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  • 188 weeks
    What would make you cry.

    I'm talking about like something in a story? What would make you, as a reader, legitimately cry? For me have a very loved character die would be the best way to make me cry, or maybe something else tragic. Then again it doesn't have to be a sad cry it could be tears of joy, maybe seeing a character have a come back from a near defeat or even come back to life defying death it self.

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    8 comments · 300 views
  • 197 weeks
    Immortaly =/= sadness

    This is one thing that constantly irritates me about Immortal Twilight stories, they always have Twilight become super miserable and depressed, or delve into dark magic to revive her friends. I get it's sad to lose friends, but what erks me is that this isn't a thing exclusive to immortal beings, last October my Grandfather died of cancer, my dog died about a month ago, my childhood doctor died

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    14 comments · 383 views
  • 200 weeks
    No Mane 6 in M&M

    Like the title says I've decided to forget about having the rest of the mane 6 in the story I'm struggling to much with trying to write them in a way that doesn't have them appear as flat, 2-dimensional characters. So yeah no mane six in their place I'll try and add other characters that don't have much in the way of personality that I can just build from scratch for the most part, like

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    17 comments · 594 views
  • 201 weeks
    Moon and Magic is not dead!

    Like the title says! I have not abandoned M&M and I don't ever plan to, I unfortunately, had to cancel Imperfect due to issues in my personal life, but M&M has no ties to my Personal life so it's safe and will be continued. I haven't been able to continue it do to life still because well I have to work so my bank account is not 0 and I have other projects that I'm working on. One of these

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    6 comments · 438 views
  • 209 weeks
    My Favorite Story and the One I want to continue the most.

    Redemption of a Broken mare.

    Okay, there's my favorite, bye!

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    27 comments · 456 views
Jun
23rd
2018

Sequal progress report · 8:55pm Jun 23rd, 2018

So... yeah it's going that's for sure. I haven't been writing much this last week besides listing events. I know what characters are going to sort of do, or I have a vague plan for most of them at this point. I've listed down specific events I want to happen in the story, but I still have a few things I need to figure out.

One, I need to figure out how I'm going to power scale all the characters especially Twilight.

Two, I need to develop proper magic rules for the universe I'm crafting; I've just finished reading The Immortal Game and I am definitely taking inspiration from that as well as Rights of Ascension. I may look at other Twilight stories like The Moonstone Cup for inspiration, but I'm also trying to make it unique and my own.

Third, the world map. I'm chucking most of the official cannon map and I'm coming up with one of my own original design. I do intend to keep parts that involve both the events of the MLP movie as well as starlights village and the Yaks, but other parts will be largely changed.

Four, Politics. I need to decide how the politics of the nations in this world are going to function and how Twilight is planning to rule Equestria.

Five, How the hell am I going to make it all work together!? Yeah still not sure about that one yet.

Anyway, I hope this gives some of you an idea and assurance that I'm not ditching this. I do want to make sure that this is my best work, and that you all will enjoy reading it.

Thank you all for reading this and have a wonderful rest of your day!

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Comments ( 6 )

I can think of something that might help: dump trying to scale other's powers to Twilight's level. It's both boring and doesn't feel needed.

Except maybe to pander to the boring people who demand it.

Besides that can't wait.

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Well, I don't want Twilight to just curb stomp every obstacle she comes across. I want her to be challenged and I also need to consider other characters who will need to be able to keep up with her in some regard, maybe not in raw power or skill, but in a talent of another regard.

Making a power scale is HARD, I should know. I have a team of characters that are strong enough to take on pretty much any heavy hitter from the series (bar Discord and The Sisters at full power)

When I scale a character's strength, I usually find a real-life object to match it to.

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I need to realistically and convincingly reduce Twilight's power and that's hard. I also need to worry about power creep too. So I need avoid making her too powerful and make sure she is not too week.

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If you need help finding out how to Gauge power levels, take a look at some of my stories, sir/ma'am. Burning Star Saga's blog posts list off some of the Wild abilities they have and how tough they are.

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I'll look into it, thanks!

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