Doing a Little Tidying Up · 7:05pm May 30th, 2018
Since I got chapter out early today doing a little tidying up of earlier chapters. Breaking up some dialogue, adding contractions, that kind of thing. Just went through chapter 10:Ponies Behaving Badly and gave a little more insight into Sunset Blessing's character (just a little) and broke up some of her larger dialogue spouts in that chapter. Will be looking over some other chapters here and there today.