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Shimmer_Bolt


To write is to create entire universes. You are a god. But will you be a kind god or a cruel god? Unfortunately, many are cruel, simply to entertain other gods.

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May
29th
2018

Sneak Peek at the new chapter · 8:54pm May 29th, 2018

Dylan trotted through the streets of Ponyville. He had gotten used to the small village, now able to tell where he was without asking for directions. He would often think back to the first day he met the Apples. His leg had been broken, and he had had no idea how to get back home. It wasn't as if he wanted to, though. He was happy here. He nodded to a passerby pony as he made his way down the road. Everypony was so friendly, and they didn't judge his human origin, like the time he went to Apple Con with his family.

"Hello there, Dylan!" a familiar voice greeted from behind him. He turned to see Filthy Rich, taking a stroll with his wife, Spoiled Rich. She looked less than happy to be among the other ponies, her head held high as if she were royalty.

Dylan rubbed the back of his head with a hoof. "Howdy, Mr. Rich," he greeted. He tried not to make eye contact with the unpleasant mare. He did, however, feel more comfortable talking to Filthy Rich. Dylan had a bit more of a stable relationship with the stallion since he came to apologize while Dylan was sick. "How are you doing?"

"I'm doing swell today. I was just taking the missus out for lunch, isn't that right, dear?" Filthy looked to his wife for confirmation.

Spoiled just looked at Dylan and made a face of disgust. "Yes. That's right," she affirmed. She seemed to at the very least 'tolerate' Dylan ever since he explained to Filthy Rich at the carnival that he had become a pony. Filthy must've told her about it.

The wealthy stallion seemed a bit nervous around his wife as he tugged on his tie. "If you'll just pardon us, we'll be on our way," he said before leaning in to whisper to Dylan, "Can't keep the missus standing in one place for too long. I apologize." Dylan nodded, and the couple went on their way.

Before they were completely out of earshot, his ears picked up on Spoiled Rich's voice. "That ape will never be a REAL pony..." Dylan looked back to counter-argue, but they were out of sight.


((What will Dylan do in this situation? :3 ))

Comments ( 7 )

Send a pissed off Apple family and Celestia on Spoiled Rich and humiliate her and ruin her so called reputation.

4872459
Okay, let's think realistically. 1. Why exactly would Celestia, Princess of the Sun, take time out of her already unmanagable schedule to help out one colt who just doesn't like a mean mare that (as much as I hate to say it) has only said a few mean things? 2. Why in the hell would the Apples attack Spoiled when her husband, one of the premiere buyers of their apples, would easily find out? I mean, unless they killed her, but I doubt it.

What I personally think should happen is that Dylan gets a bit crafty. (Assuming this is after DT's retribution) He enlists the help of several other fillies and colts, manages to break into the Rich manor at night with Diamond Tiara's help, and set out very, very many traps for Spoiled.

4872612
So instead of family solution you'd go Saw mode on her?

4872612

4872459

This is, in fact, set after Diamond Tiara's retribution. I can also say with certainty that some punishment in some form will occur at some time. But I doubt Celestia will be involved, nor will the Apples physically harm anyone. Please trust me that the punishment will be both nonviolent and yet still satisfying.

4872614
That is deliberately putting words in my mouth. As much as we all hate her, I have the doubt that any of us truly wish her dead, and even less so for the ponies. I apologize if I came off as rude, and was not my intent. But please, don't go around making false claims. They only make an ass of both of us.

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