Minor edits on "The Replacements"

Because The Replacements is a work in progress, I'm also occasionally needing to make a few minor tweeks here and there. That, plus grammar errors that readers point out I'm also trying to fix. So leading up to chapter 3's release I'll be doing a little work on the first two chapters. I'll comment on the beginning of chapter three if I change anything significant from the previous two chapters, but I shouldn't need to.

Comments

[CelestialBrony]

Huuki gaga laka moka nipple pinchie.

[AlicornPriest]

452433
Uh.... yeah. What he said.

[OtterMatt]

Do you find that to get edits to stick, you have to unpublish and republish the chapters? Cause that seems to be how it's working for me, and that means every time I edit, everyone gets an update notification.

[Zytharros]

452433
...Wha. Derpy? Could you translate.

Well, obviously, he or she meant to describe the interpolation of the hypotenuse for a muffin-sized canker sore as described by Isaac Asimare in his book Foundation and Equestria, that, when coupled with the air speed velocity of the average alicorn, which is found by dividing the square of the combined top speeds of Celestia, Luna and Rainbow Dash by my average flight speed and then doubling the fun of eating a castle made of muffin batter with four of my alternate selves, equals the exact squared multiple of Pinkie Pie's mane's full storage capacity.
I mean, only an idiot would miss that.

...Yeah, thanks, Derpy...

[DarthMaul22]

452468
You just hit save. Easy as .

[OtterMatt]

452522
Yeah, if it was that easy it would have worked by now. I guess it's just me then.

[daylight savage]

452474. That explain eryting
y u so smart

[iloveportalz0r]

452433 A ranarep yo lovep toleratet Rainbow Dash

[Zytharros]

454039
Derpology 101. I'm the leading authority. Geez. How many idiots in this world are there?

Uh, Derpy, now's not the time to get arro-

I mean, only I truly know the rules of the universe. That's why Pinkie Pie can break them so easily. I let her.

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