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Vitobru


I like to write things. What more must I say?

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  • 317 weeks
    FoE: ASofH Status

    Hey everypony,

    I'm talking with you once again because I wanted to let you all know what is in the works for the story (non-spoiler wise), and let you know what I'm planning on doing.

    So, as you probably know, I finally finished the rewrites of the first two chapters! Yay! But, you may also know that there hasn't been much progress since I finished; and it's for good reason.

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  • 321 weeks
    HEY! IT'S ME! NOT AUSTIN!

    Well, hello everypony. This is a real first for me. I usually don't make blogs. Well, I used to not write, but now I'm creating a novel based on a story I love. Seems that there's a first for everything. So, what I came here today to talk about is FoE: A Song of Hope. So, if you've been wondering where the new chapters have gone, and you're not someone who can read very big bold text, then

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HEY! IT'S ME! NOT AUSTIN! · 11:54pm Mar 3rd, 2018

Well, hello everypony. This is a real first for me. I usually don't make blogs. Well, I used to not write, but now I'm creating a novel based on a story I love. Seems that there's a first for everything. So, what I came here today to talk about is FoE: A Song of Hope. So, if you've been wondering where the new chapters have gone, and you're not someone who can read very big bold text, then you may want to know that I've been rewriting the chapters for the story recently.
I have been told by my proofreaders (Props to Sabre_cat! Whoop whoop!) that I need to improve upon my pacing in each chapter and my character's (Rae's) personality in her narration. It's really quite relieving when you learn to accept criticism as it comes, no matter how it's presented. (Except for you Saber, you were always very supportive. Especially with Chekhov's Gun)
Well, that really all I have to say at the moment. I think that I'll do a few more of these in the future. Also, I posted the final version (I think) of Chapter One today. Just FYI, in case you didn't see the comment. Good night everypony!

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I'll have to read the final version of Ch.1 then. Good job with it thus far :twilightsmile:

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