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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Feb
2nd
2018

Into the Storm: Flight of Firefly - Chapter 8 Draft Complete · 7:58pm Feb 2nd, 2018

*** Reposted with apologies because I forgot to tag the story in the original blog entry. By the time I noticed, it had fallen off the feed list. ***

Part 8 of Flight of Firefly is off to prereaders and I’m quite pleased with it. I’m going to attempt to get some new battle graphics done for it, but if they're not ready by Sunday, I’ll leave them off for now. But that’s just icing on the cake at this point. A teaser? Okay, but Just a hint: lore from the most recent reason of MLP regarding an ancient pony fighting force is incorporated and plays a surprising role.

Want more to chew on? Fine. Here’s Firefly’s opening narration to the chapter:


Before we begin this crucial third chapter to the Battle of Cloudsdale, I would like to take a moment to thank all those who have contributed or still will to this growing work, including the trio of guest authors that have penned these three latest chapters describing the combat and outright carnage at Cloudsdale and those pegasi, civilian and soldier alike, who fought in its defense. I know full well 'tis oft painful to relive the battles we fought and remember those who fell, but 'tis necessary that we do so so to honor their memory and ensure their legacy lives on.

'Twas not my original intention that we marked these chapters with visits to the battle sites we describe, but as we write we find ourselves all but compelled to, wishing to remember or at least reminiscence. As the Equestrian Officer Academy was out of session for the recent winter holidays, the surviving Bolt Knights gathered in Cloudsdale for a New Years' commemoration of the recently unveiled monument of Thunderbolt, an exquisitely carved statue erected in front of the Remedial Flyers' School he once taught at, a place where he can forever stand watch over the city he once saved. I have more to say about this event, but this is one instance where I feel my words are best saved for the end; for after the full story of the battle is told.

In the meantime, I turn my quill back over to those who were present at Cloudsdale during the Gryphon attack. I promise that the story's attention will return to my own battalion at Epsilon soon enough, but ‘tis simply little point in it for now. For mid-afternoon on the first of September, we were not under attack but knew well one was coming; with all the other outposts around us falling one by one I had no doubt that the next wave would hit us at nightfall and be far more difficult to defeat.

—Firefly

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Thanks. Chapter will launch in twelve hours.

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