Jan
28th
2018
Sweet Buttery Christ · 11:53pm Jan 28th, 2018
It's only the 2nd week of my crafting fiction class, AND JUST READ THE WORST STORY EVER!
It's self insert fanfic about our college.
Its pretentious
it's preachy
its ego stroking to the point I'm surprised the paper it's printed doesn't reek of cum.
It took me an hour to read it because I stood up every ten minutes to shout "WHAT THE FUCK AM I READING!"
I'm tempted to transcribe it in a google doc so you can experience this bullshit!
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Oh god that sounds pretty bad. It's how I felt about my first prolific before I realized it was meant to written that way. At least when I did a self insert, I made myself a genie, but I didn't make the story focus on me after that, I pushed myself to the sideline for the real stars of the show.
Damn
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It's supposed to be a dialogue piece not a prolific piece!
AND THE DIALOG IS, okay, kinda awkward and stilted a lot but not god awful.
Why didn't you drop it?
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I have to read it for my crafting fiction class
4784013
Well good luck thing my friend, need a mecha?
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sure why not
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Good, here you go.
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thats not funny
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Yes it is, hehe.
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Is it from that Gundam thing you talked about a few months back?
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What thing?
make it a Gdoc I wanna see it (~_^)