Jan
28th
2018
New Story: RariTwi Craziness · 12:43am Jan 28th, 2018
Yo, guys!
So, I ended up working overdrive today and actually finished the RariTwi story I was working on. It's out now, actually!
Now, here's the deal. It's a lot different from my usual stuff. I'll just say that up front. It focuses more on the uglier side of relationships. Not like "edgy, suicidal" ugly, but more like that obstacle newer couples go through and the stress it causes. It also relies more on narration and description to carry the story instead of dialogue, which is what I'm known for.
So, long story short, this might now be for everyone, but I really hope you can check it out if you have the time and let me know what you think. Good, bad, yay, nay... Feedback of all types is good in my book.
Peace out!
-Famous
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Um... is it okay that I don't like RariTwi? Also, why is it that no author ever takes into account dealing with Spike during any RariTwi fic? It's like they don't understand that Spike would feel betrayed by Twilight and Rarity falling in love, seeing as he's had a crush on her since he first arrived. Honestly, I'd like to do something like that, except I'm better at Writing Spike fics for some reason
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I don't like RariTwi much either. I just had to write this due to a lost bet. I thought about writing a thing including Spike and his feelings, but the opportunity wasn't there. So I did throw a reference in there about him being with Flitter, so it's better than nothing.
Hooray!
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Hmm... makes sense. I also saw on some stories that you helped write some chapters for it. Do you think you could help with my two Spike fics? One is rated T and is a TwiSpike detailing how Spike has to get over his broken heart from confessing to Rarity, and how Twilight is finally able to "hopefully" Reveal her true feelings to him, while spike is having his own internal struggle about Being a Dragon in a Pony society. The other is rated M, and is, well, more complicated to describe
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I get you, man. If you ever have any questions or need some tips on writing something specific, send me a PM and I'll try and help if I have the time.
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Thanks. That would be a huge help. I'm still fairly, well, a noob to writing like this.
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I understand what you mean. I actually really enjoy Raritwi but even though I’m a huge fan even I myself wonder why they don’t incorporate Spike into the story. Some of them do though not very many. And when they do they either let it go easily and there’s no problem and it’s so out of character or they only go a little of the ways through. I’ve read only one story where the Spike drama actually seemed to be accurate. Like it took him a long time to be okay with it and he felt betrayed. I don’t remember what it was called but I completely understand your meaning and where you’re coming from. Stories like Mono’s Enchanted Library though are different. Where Spike never met Rarity to fall in love with her. Things like are better than the ‘Oh I love Rarity, Spike’ and Spike is just ‘Okay.’ Or he’s not even mentioned. Sometimes they end the story without having ever got around to it but have mentioned it like ‘oh my, what are we going to tell Spike??’ Or ‘How will continue this with Spike?’ There was one or two where it revolved only around Spikes feelings. Like Twi had fallen for Rarity and the other way around but refuse to be together for the sake of Spike.
I might have gotten cartried away but I think I just now realized a big flaw in that.... I hope I did not offend you with this reply though.. and if I did I am truly sorry. I am almost die hard Raritwi fan but I have no need to harrass those who are not. My very first mlp ship was Appledash. Never thought of the other main sox being in a relationship other than that one. So I’ll probably move on to my next ship in a few months to a year. XP
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I have no shiphate, so you do you
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Awesome bud!! XP
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Although, in my story Dragon Scars, i'm going to do a Mane 7 x Spike Harem Idea... because Harem
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Mane 7??who’s the extra? Sunset or Starlight??
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Sunset. Well, I should say mane 8 because Sunset is Twilight's assistant in this fic, because Spike was sent to a universe where he was given back to his parents after Twilight hatched him, because this spike grew up in a world where dragons were treated as slaves at best