What will happen next? · 3:00am Sep 30th, 2017
Okay some context. This is the scene I'm currently working on. The Apple Family has retired to bed early so they're rested and ready for the Summer Sun Celebration at dawn. Comet has gone to bed and finds himself in a dream being called to by a mysterious voice.
"Kom-El? Wake up Kom-El."
"Huh...Wha? I slowly opened my eyes and looked around.
"Wake up my little star foal, we have much to discuss."
Thats all I've got so far, I'd tossed around a few ideas but they either wrote into a dead end or spoiled the plot too soon. And so I've once again I come to you for ideas. Where is Comet? Who is the mysterious voice? What does it plan to discuss with him? Leave your suggestions in the comments below.
I would say the voice is Luna’s as she is warning him about Nightmare Moon’s return. Since his arrival she has been keeping tabs on this unique colt. She has become partially aware of her sisters plans from Celestia's dreams and that is also how she found out about Apple Comet’s real name from his dreams. She wants Kom-El to tail Twilight and company to keep off the more dangerous stuff that Nightmare Moon as laid out. Since Nightmare Moon is currently distracted she is making her move to end the threat that Nightmare Moon presents.
Im just whant som sister and Brother Love like hugs and fluff.
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Yeah. I have to say, this DOES sound pretty good. In fact, I literally can't think of anything better.
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I think your gonna like what I've got in the next upcoming chapter.