I'm beginning to think about making Ruby a little mystery · 2:45pm Sep 23rd, 2017
Chapter 1 is more questionable than it was before I edited. The way Ruby and Kasper meet in the few weeks of Ruby being in the castle is less rushed now and more mysterious. Questions of "who" and "why" will be asked more instead of "what" and "why". The chapter is so close to being done. The story is more interesting to me and hopefully, it's interesting to everyone else too. Once the chapter is done, I promise it will be better.