Character Commentary: Episode Versus 23 (23-2)... · 5:30am Aug 13th, 2017
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Episode Versus 23 (23-2)
Bob Tom: Hello Everypony...my name is....................................Bob Tom..........................................the creator and the god of Universal Magic.....hoo ray for me. And Welcome to the commentary to Episode Versus 23. And today I have with me Knight from the said episode...why don't you say hello Knight?
Knight: Hello everypony...I'm Knight, that dumbass that agreed to the whole thing.
Bob Tom: Yes you did Knight, I even got you to sign a contract that sold me your soul forever and ever. So now you work for me.
Knight: Yeah, when I get to hell...
Bob Tom: You mean Neon Hell....
Knight: Right...Neon Hell...when I get there...I'm going to be tortured forever by Neon won't I? Like he'll be my personal torturer and everything?
Bob Tom: Yes that is correct my good friend....you will be suffering by the hooves of Neon...and you can suck it...
Knight: Well that's great to know. Anyways...what episode are we doing today?
Bob Tom: We are doing Episode Versus 23, also known originally as Episode 23-2.
Knight: Ahhh yes...this episode...this episode took a long time to get done didn't it?
Bob Tom: Yes it did and before we begin...I believe the audience would like to know what happened behind the scenes and what took so long.
Knight: What audience? You mean the crickets that only came here to make their cricket noise to tell us we all suck?
Bob Tom: Yes Knight...that audience.
Knight: Well aright then...tell us Bob...tell us why it took so long to make this..."masterpiece"....
Bob Tom: Well, after we got done with Episode 23-1, which started development in late Spring of 2015 and ended in December of 2015, around Christmas time, I wanted to take a bit of a break because it was really tough to get that episode out.
Knight: Yeah I remember that episode too, you took forever on that one and you took even longer on this one...over a year...why so long? And please tell me, I would like to know why my time was wasted when I was on set those days and you never had me do jack shit
Bob Tom: well as you know I have other businesses and hobbies, such as gaming and I won't lie....I got lazy and combined with other responsibilities, I just never had the time. I made time whenever I could, never really worked out, always tired and such, but you know...we made it and we shall continue to move forward into the next Episode....
Knight: Which is still Episode 23...correct?
Bob Tom: That is right...why you ask?
Knight: Because it sounds ridiculous to have one episode to be so long that you had to split it up into 5 different parts....and the sad part is you originally had it at four parts too at one point...what the fuck happened?
Bob Tom: Well, we had some creative issues with the executives and...
Knight: What executives? Nobody funds us but you.....I mean you literally give the entire show a 20 dollar budget per year....
Bob Tom: Yes well...I'm not ashamed of that.
Knight: Well you should be...now are we starting this commentary or fucking what?
Bob Tom: Yes....we will...let's begin. Oh and by the way, later on we will have Neon in the studio soon for a little bit of a guest star appearance...
Knight: Oh god no...why did you have to invite him?
Bob Tom: Well...he is in this episode briefly and I thought..why the hell not you know?
Knight: Oh fucking great...just start the fucking episode already....
Bob Tom: alright then..here we begin....
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" The. The. The. Huh...Funny enough I'm drawing a blank on my memory here. What did happen after that train crash? "
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Knight: So this is a weird beginning...can you explain why you had me say those lines?...
Bob Tom: Sure...I guess...I just thought you needed to somehow start off the whole episode one way or another. So I just thought...why not that? You know?...
Knight: Yeah....no...not really. It's like...a horrible way to start off a story.
Bob Tom: Well you know you're not god here...are you? And besides, when you think about it, it is sort of memorable to start off the way that it did...
Knight: No it isn't, you're just dumb is all.
Bob Tom: Well, whatever, I'm sticking with my guns...
Knight: Well you do know that you do get criticism for this...right? I mean I read one of the comments and said that the story is like some mad man talking and that person couldn't make heads or tails of this story.
Bob Tom: Well, all I have to say to that is good for him. If that's the way the person saw it, then that's what it is. And besides I find it funny that's what that person saw. I love it.
Knight: Whatever...let's move on...
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" So, I suppose the best I can say I blacked out...and that we all should start on the journey that I had with Neon and that Griffin Guy...nah I'm just fucking with you, I have that portal thing to tell me how it all happened."
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Knight: So can you explain something to me? What the fuck up is this thing with the portal? I don't think everyone gets it...although...I suppose personally for me it's fine I guess. A little lazy if you ask me, but, you know....what is it exactly that you're trying to do here?
Bob Tom: Well your character is supposed to be at this point telling the story from the future. Pretty much towards the point of the 6.5 endings and at this point, your character knows some spells that can open up portals and see into the past at whatever angle and such. Sort of like a window of sorts, but you can place that window wherever you want. And for your character Knight, which is...Knight...that is what is supposed to be happening here. That is why you can tell what happened, even though you were not there at all and even can go into the other's minds of what it was at the time. That's the basic idea. In a sense, you can take the portal and act it like a camera, although that only makes sense when you see it in a visual format. but, whatever...you get the idea here.
Knight: I get it there Bob. You were too lazy to write this third person.
Bob Tom: I don't get why people think that. I didn't want to do this third person because I thought it would be better first person. And besides, it works...I'm sure of it...
Knight: Yeah...sure...whatever you say there buddy. All I know is when we shot the thing, it sounded dumb. I mean I was just talking to myself for the entire scene and I just kept thinking in my head how dumb this was. But I suppose it's passable...I guess...if you think about it long enough. I guess. but it's still a dumb idea to be fair.
Bob Tom: Whatever...I still stick to my guns....
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" He looked...very sinister like, but not with like an evil smile or anything like that. He was just simply evil looking. He especially changed from the last time I saw him, which was basically The Fall, and he had simple black hair in a simple style had circles under his eyes as if hadn't slept in days, bit of a facial hair growing on his face, and a set of brown colored eyes that says he isn't in the mood to talk."
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Knight: So this is like the first time we are really seeing the villain TF for the first time with the exceptions from before where you just mentioned him is all along with a brief appearance from the first episode.
Bob Tom: Yeah...umm...in this episode, I feel like we are getting to know TF a little more. Usually, all I've done was just mention him as a villain, and the original plan was to sort of keep it that way. This was sort of unexpected to be honest, which I'll explain later. But in this episode, I do believe we've made something here that made it in a way to show who TF is. Because before all you knew about him was he was a villain and stuff. That's about roughly it other than your characters' relationship with him. But now you get to see how much of a threat he really can be. In this episode, you will see just how far he's willing to go to just do a little test. You can see how crazy he can be and how much he is not a force to be reckon with and such. I do believe this episode is still about Knight and his life, but it's also about the villain as well. The last episode, 23-1, was about Knight and TK. They were both sharing the spotlight, but in this one, it's the complete opposite. Instead of a friend that's sharing the spotlight it's now the villain that was once a friend to Knight sharing the spotlight. And last episode, I really thought we did a good job with showing a little bit more to TK's side and all, but with this one we are showing a lot more about the villain TF and show him how he is. Maybe not to the full extent, but it's a start to show who TF really is and getting to know him more.
Knight: Wow...that was long. You suck...
Bob Tom: Well fuck you too....
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" Wait a minute here...did I already described what TF looked like before? I don't know...I mean life and everything just got in the way and all of a sudden I've forgotten if I had described him or not. Well thanks to a lot of Cow Tippers, I guess I have forgotten.
I didn't used to have to worry about if I already described someone or something, but I guess I have to now you no good sons of bitches! But then...you Cow Tippers are an important part of society...in which case you're neither the whale...the monkey...or the horse...you're that little lemming...that may or may not be a retard...wait...are lemmings retarded? I don't know...it's not like I'm the one living on Earth and have to deal with Wikipedia.
You read that Bobby! Fuck you for changing Wikipedia articles...we all know that Bruce Wayne is really Clark Kent...and that Bruce Wayne is Batman...it just makes sense."
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Knight: Now this is where I thought you were doing it all wrong. Why the fuck is my character forgetting stuff and why is he complaining about Wikipedia articles?"
Bob Tom: Hasn't it been said already in the story?
Knight: No....
Bob Tom: Fine then...let me explain...with this part, your character does forget things. I mean, at this point in time, the character forgets sometimes. Not that it's amnesia, but sometimes the character just forgets like anyone else, although a little bit more than others do. A tiny character trait perhaps. As for the whole Wikipedia thing...well I did say your character goes off track.
Knight: True, but I feel like it shouldn't be a part of the story. It just feels like you are only doing it because you don't care...
Bob Tom: Nope...that's not what it is...
Knight: Then what it is it then? Why have these random things pop up?...
Bob Tom: I think it's self explanatory....
Knight: No it isn't...
Bob Tom: Well while I could sit here and explain every single little thing to you and the audience, I think it would be dumb. I mean I've always been told to assume the reader knows nothing. But then that would mean that the reader is retarded and I would think the reader would know at least common sense and something. Maybe not the story, but know when to figure something out on their own.
Knight: You're stupid. I don't even know why you're even doing this in the first place...
Bob Tom: Well you wouldn't understand...
Knight: Yeah...maybe I wouldn't...maybe I wouldn't...
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" Anyways, he only wore just the black ski mask and he said as he looked dead straight at TF and said, "Uh...why are you talking to yourself sir?"
TF slowly turned his head, as if he was offended by what he just said to him. However, TF wasn't offended by question, but instead annoyed. TF just wanted to be alone with his thoughts and to mind his own business.
TF said, "What are you doing Sky? You should be back with the others, helping them We don't have much time you know."
The pony with the ski mask on that was named Sky then said, "Yes sir."
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Knight: Ok, so I've heard something's and you have a reason why this entire episode happened. Correct?
Bob Tom: Correct...
Knight: So...if I am correct, this is the part while you were in the developmental process, where the whole thing changed for this episode. Explain it please...
Bob Tom: Yes I will. So, basically saying, Episode 23, and I'll say it again, wasn't supposed to be this long. And I'm referring to it as a whole. Originally with what happened with Episode 23-1 where Knight and TK broke into the castle was supposed to be short and stuff. Just a little side thing going on before the real plot of episode 23 started. But that didn't happen because of how long it took. Well, this episode of 23-2 was supposed to be what will be for episode 23-3. Basically saying, the next episode that the viewers will see, which is episode 23-3, which we will start shooting very soon I might add, was supposed to be episode 23-2, but that didn't came to be. The reason is this part right here. As I was making the whole story and stuff, I felt TF needed a henchman or two or something like that. I felt like it would have been odd just having him be by himself. So I decided to have him have a few other ponies with him. Then after a bit of writing. I thought...why not go a little deeper into these henchmen and one thing led to another and pretty much this episode happened. There was originally no character called Sky planned, no Blacky, no Snow, none of that shit. But what was originally was supposed to be an episode about Knight going to the cabins, the same place where TF and his group once were at, except it was just the cabins, has now turned into this, unintentionally. And that's the thing with me, you never know what you're going to get. I may plan things out this way, but in the end I end up doing things totally a different way. I always change things up and write stuff that not even I expected. Because I never know what to write exactly until I am writing. And as I am writing the story, the story just kind of comes out as I go along. Like it just flows outs. Or at least how I feel about it all. I know that sounds weird, but that's how I work. I don't really plan it all out and expect to be that way. I mean I do an outline, but at the same time it never goes 100% that certain way. It's always going to be something that I never expected to be there happening. And while that may sound bad, I'm fine with it, because this episode happened. I would not have thought about doing an episode TF and how crazy he can be. Originally it was just about Knight on the road to getting back to Stalia, but instead this happened and I'm glad it happened....
Knight: You still suck. The dislike to like ratio proves that...
Bob Tom: I know....I know...funny story...I actually had a dream about that once...
Knight: Did you now...and what was it?....
Bob Tom: Oh I saw that the dislike bar was at over ten thousand dislikes while the like bar was like five thousand. And a recent one I had was where the dislike bar was only at three hundred, but yet the entire bar was green. Not sure what happened there, but that's dreams for ya...
Knight: Yup...you still suck....
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Well almost in the middle of nowhere, as there is a path, more or less a road near the cabin, but aside from there, it's surrounded by large open fields of snow of pure white
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Bob Tom: Just to clarify, this place will be coming back in the next episode.
Knight: Huh...you know I've been to those kind of places once before...to the log cabins...out in the middle of nowhere.
Bob Tom: Really? And how was it for you?"
Knight: Well when I went, there was a lot of red necks looking funny at me...and let's just say...one of them tried to make me squeal like a pig...turned out though I was in a real life situation of The hills have Eyes...it was weird.
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There were two cowponies pulling it with two ponies on top. A brother and sister actually, and of course, their names were, at least for their code names that is, Pink and Mr. Brown. They were there on the wagon, riding in.
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Bob Tom: The thing is about Pink and Mr. Brown was that
I wanted their characters to be a brother and sister relationship, but the one where the siblings are always fighting and never shut the hell up. And with those two characters, in a sense, I wanted them to be the ones that are the idiots of the group. And you can obviously see that with the things that they say. Although to be fair I didn't intend for their characters to have much to do in this episode, I originally just had them planned to speak a little in the beginning, but as time went in, you never hear a peep from them, mostly because they were made as throw away characters. Kind of one of the reason why they die first....that and their characters are idiots, and both are scum bags. Like the sister doesn't care if her own brother dies and get his head chopped off and laughs even at that and the brother just rapes her...but...you know..make it whatever you wish you want to make out of it...
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TF then said, "Yes, well, you shall have to keep your carriage here, I'm sure you can store it in that barn over there."
TF then pointed with his right hoof over by the barn that wasn't too far away.
TF then continued to say, "Do not worry, it'll be there by the time that you are finished."
Sky then said, "Alright then, I shall do just that."
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Bob Tom: Fair warning, in the next episode, depending on when it has come out and by the time you are reading this, I might have forgotten to put in the carriage as a reference.
Knight: Yeah...you forget stuff a lot...
Bob Tom: Yeah well...when you're a one man band...you tend to forget some things. I mean I write and direct alone with the exception of you guys of course, but all you guys do is what I tell you to do...so you get the idea. I mean with me and writing this, when I was editing it the first time around, I was looking back at what I had written for the beginning and it was like...I don't remember writing this. So the stuff that I had written a year and a half ago was completely forgotten to me compared to the stuff that I had written towards the end...so I had some fixing to do because there were some inconsistencies with some of the dialogue and such...but...in the end I made it all work...so it's good...same thing happened to me with Episode 22...I had forgotten what I had wrote in the beginning, especially the Santa Claus joke in that episode...I don't even remember writing that joke...but yet..it was there somehow...
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Anyways, TF was then awaiting his wielder that he had asked Sky to do a while ago. Now let's get back to Sky since I'm sure you Cow Tippers would have demanded me to show the details about Blacky handing TF the bombs that he asked for...because you know...it is what it is...which is Cow Tippers. Anyways, as Blacky was taking the bombs to TF, Sky went ahead and jumped on to the cart and searched for the wielder that TF had asked.
Sky didn't know that there was a wielder on the cart, but in this universe before the guns came into existence, there was of course existed wielders so Sky was familiar as to what TF was talking about, however...he wasn't an expert on wielders and he saw many kinds of wielders and looked confused as to what TF had wanted. And so Sky stood there and looked confused, trying to think the best one to take to TF.
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Bob Tom: Now with Universal Magic, sometimes I have to do a little research, and sometimes I want to keep things realistic...and sometimes not...but for the little things like...for example a wielder, I like to try and keep it realistic. The thing is though I'm not 100% sure if I had gotten the information correct about this kind of stuff...I don't know...it's not my particular field of expertise so I wouldn't know, but I tried at least. It was a bit hard to understand though, but I think I've got it right, but don't quote me on that...I might be wrong...and chances are...I am...but then again I don't know really.
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So I kept walking and walking...with nothing to eat or drink, was kind of thirsty, but I wasn't bothered by it though. I then kept walking and walking and walking until I finally realized how far away Stalia was from Cantorlot. I mean in the show, it seemed like it was only an hour away from Ponyville to Cantorlot, but it wasn't here...but then again they were on a train and I wasn't. But then again still...I should have at least started to see the towns in the distance.
However, after a few hours of not noticing that I was being followed and walking a boring path of nothing but rail road tracks...I did come across something that was slightly interesting. And it was a little hotel on the side of the railroad tracks, and there was a fat old stallion and old mare there, sitting outside, looking like old happy folks. And then...I could just hear the music in my head...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Jx2jEPvh88
And to my right, there was a little water tower thingy, and there were some dresses out as well.
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Bob Tom: I couldn't help but make a joke about this...I mean I've watched Petty Coat Junction a little bit and couldn't help myself. Granted though I'm mostly of a Hogan's Heroes/ Welcome Back Kotter/ALF fan myself, but...whatever...it was an alright show in my opinion...that and The Wild Wild West was also a good show in my opinion, but Bonanza was...kind of boring...Gun smoke was good though...
Knight: Yeah, I know what you mean. I sometimes watch reruns of that stuff every now and then. But what I used to watch though was The Brady Bunch and Mama's Family...
Bob Tom: I never watched that stuff...I mean...it sounds interesting, but in the end I don't give a fuck about it...just like Leave it to Beaver...have you ever seen the movie to Leave it to Beaver before though?
Knight: I've heard of it...but never watched it myself though...
Bob Tom: Well...it's kind of bad...have it on VHS....
Knight: Ahhh...those old crappy VHS days....so glad we moved on to DVD, Blu-Ray, and other stuff like digital downloads and shit...
Bob Tom: I prefer just DVD and Blu-ray, not crazy about digital downloads and streaming. In fact I kind of hate them.
Knight: Well...to each their own I guess....
Bob Tom: Yeah...I guess, but with VHS tapes though...I kind of miss them. Not that they were good, but they kind of had a novelty to them....if you know what I'm saying...
Knight: I know what you're saying...like that weird phone dialing sound you get at the beginning...you just don't get that kind of "Quality" anymore...but I think that's just the nostalgia talking though...
Bob Tom: Maybe...
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Then it took one of its hooves and took out a bat that it had on its back and then started to yell as it ran toward me, "DOC! DOC! DOC! COME ON MAN! MEDIC! MEDIC! MEDIC! DOC! DOC! DOC! COME ON MAN!"
And as it was saying those words to me, it was swinging its bat in the air like a maniac, as if it was trying to hit me with it. I got startled of course and tried to run away, but the Scout was too fast for me. I
t was even faster than Sanic the Hedgehog and it started to beat me over the head with the metal bat. Surprisingly it wasn't that painful, just slightly annoying.
As Scout kept bashing my skull with its metal bat, I kept saying, "Ow. Ow. Ow. Ow. Ow. Ow. Ow. Ow."
And as I was saying Ow all the time, Scout kept saying, "DOC! DOC! DOC! COME ON MAN! MEDIC! MEDIC! MEDIC! COME ON MAN! DOC! DOC! DOC! COME ON MAN!"
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Bob Tom: I couldn't help but put this in but the idea behind this little joke type thing was that one time I was playing TF2, for The Orange Box on PS3 no less, in the middle of the night, and basically saying something happened that gave me this idea. It was where someone playing as the medic was not moving at all and there were two scouts there were hitting him with a bat endlessly while calling for the medic...and I couldn't help but put this on here, and besides, wouldn't it be kind of scary where you're just out in the middle of nowhere, like maybe walking aside some train tracks, and all of a sudden a scout comes out from the darkness and starts yelling for the medic while whacking you with the baseball bat...
Knight: That would be kind of scary...I mean...it kind of feels like it would be just silly..but I get ya though....
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Ted herd the hopping and saw the bunny that was holding a basket filled with colored eggs and he then said to the pink bunny, “Oh hey! There’s my friend that I know. Hey…over here!”
Ted was waving towards the pink bunny and gesturing for the pink bunny to come over here.
Eventually the pink bunny made its way over to where we were and the pink bunny looked a little weird as it was wearing a light blue vest and it said, “Hi! I’m the Easter Bunny’s second twin brother….Derek.”
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Bob Tom: For those that don't know, I'm making reference to Aqua Teen Hunger Force's Season 4 Episode well at least I think it's from season 4, T-Shirt of the Dead or something like that where Meatwad thinks up the Easter Bunny's Twin brother...Darrel...now meet the third twin...Derek....
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As I got closer, the pony was saying to the retarded one, “I know Engineer! That’s what I’m trying to do! But these damn Fruit Bowls keep screwing everything up with my wheel chair I tell you! I blame all of these troll terrorists and cyber vermin!”
And the Engineer then said, “duh dad ahaaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!”
The pony in the wheel chair then said, “That’s right Engineer! You said it! When we get back home and do another show…I’m going to make sure to give those CIA people a piece of my mind for double dipping my chips! And besides, even if they do send Eminem after me, I’ll still kill him and be sent to jail and become king of the blacks! They’ll hoist me up and be saying ‘Yeah baby!’ I’ll be king of the Blacks you hear! I’m a dangerous man you hear!”
I then got a little closer as I stopped in my tracks as I felt like I didn’t want to get too close to these ponies. However, since I was out in plain sight, they noticed me, well, at least the one in the wheel chair did.
He instantly looked at me with a hard stare and said to me, “What are you looking at!?”
I then said, “Nothing…it’s just that…who the fuck are?”
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Bob Tom: Now being a Brony myself, I couldn't resist the urge to put Ghost and the Engineer in here somewhere. I mean...it was going to happen at some point. I still plan on putting Ghost in future episodes as reference, although funny thing was though. The character The Masked Ghost for Universal Magic, in the show that is, for his character, he wasn't planned on being in it from the beginning, he was kind of thrown in as time went on. But the Season two or three episode was it? Well that episode that I have The Masked Ghost scheduled to be focused on in an episode was originally supposed to be Ghost himself from TCR...but no longer the case because there's not much I can do there. But as a joke...I can do a lot with it. And this is one of them, and to clarify, Ghost actually says this stuff in real life, I'm not joking about him being the king of the blacks..he says that in all truth...that's not a joke and coming from me...just listen to one of his broadcasts and you'll see what I'm talking about....
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The bear got close, but Blacky then yelled while stomping his hooves on the ground, "Get! Get I say! Go away you bear! Go! Leave now before I attack you! You know very well much that we don't want to fight! Now go! Get out of here before anything bad happens!"
Blacky made sure to stomp his hooves hard to make sure the bear knew that he wasn't playing around. However, the bear then just stood up on its hind legs and gave a roar at Blacky.
When Blacky saw this, he said, "Oh shiiiit!"
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Bob Tom: This is one of the other things that I tried to research on and is what do you do when a bear tries to attack you? Well...here it is from what I've found on the internet...apparently you're supposed to try and scare it away so you aren't to be messed with...
Knight: Have you ever been attacked by a bear before?
Bob Tom; Obviously not...but I've been close to a snake bite before though...that and a bee sting...one of the poison ones too...that and apparently when I was little I was playing with a very poisonous spider as well...
Knight: Ahhhhh....I see...I got raped by a wolf once...
Bob Tom: Was it Wolf?
Knight: No...it was a very lonely wolf...possibly a nerd that was an outcast from its pack....
Bob Tom: Oh...ok then....
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"Fresh Meat... New Prey... Tasty Treat... Outsiders... Come Closer... Do They See Us?..." Soon they started to hear distorted voices as well which included, "Welcome To Hell... Your Time Will Come soon... Don't Trust The Sheppard... We Are Always Watching You... We All Have To Go Sometime... I'll Laugh With Thee... Herman You Pushed Me... The Bird Found The City..."
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Bob Tom: Fun Fact: Some of those lines that are being whispered are lines that you would hear if you play some of the MLP songs backwards...like one of them is from the song Smile....assuming if you play it backwards....
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Then Neon came out of nowhere and he said, "Hey Knight...didn't think you would be in my dream tonight! This is so awesome!"
Then Neon, as he was right next to me, took a huge dump in front of me and had three baby chickens. All as he was smiling in a creepy way.
I then looked at him weird and asked, "Uhh...why am I in your dream?"
Neon then said, "Don't be silly wily Knight...we're sharing a dream...and it looks like we're going to have a real fun time too...so.....you want fuck a printer?"
I then gave him a stale look and said, "I'm leaving now."
As I was walking away from Neon, he then said to me, "Well see you when you get back then! Try not to let TF kill you! Wouldn't want him to spoil all the fun!"
I then stopped in my tracks within the dream world and turned back around to return to Neon as his comment made me surprised as he knew where I was at during that time.
I then asked him, "How do you know that TF is trying to kill me? In fact, why aren't you trying to get help and save me?"
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Knight: Oh god here comes Neon....
Neon: Hi Everypony! it's me...your friendly neighborhood chicken fucker to tell you what I did for this scene! ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... I stabbed a guy.....an then had his slowly decomposing corpse turn into butterflies as a walkie talkie ran up Michael Jordan and shoved his head up his asshole.... Thank and you good night...don't forget to shoot your waitresses....
bye...
Knight: Well then...onwards I suppose...
Neon: Hey Knight...how many does it take to screw in a light bulb?
Knight: What?
Neon: You don't...you just stab five chickens and a carrot....ha ha ha....
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Mr. Brown then said, "It kind of turns me on."
He said with a smile and within that smile was a horrible looking grin with a few missing teeth to go along with it.
Pink of course didn't like what her brother said so she then slapped him on the back of the head with her hoof and yelled at him, "You fucking pervert!"
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Bob Tom: Yeah...I just kind of randomly did this....
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And so Pink repeated the act several more times but as she was doing so, she kept saying to her own brother, "OH YEAH!!! YOU'VE BEEN A BAD FUCKING BOY TONIGHT YOU SON OF A BITCH!!! YOU NEED A GOOD FUCKING SPANKING! HOW ABOUT I SING MY VERSION OF THE ABC'S!"
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Bob Tom: The whole thing with Pink doing those things to her own brother was sort of added at last minute during editing...especially the part where she shot her brother and started licking the hole, I thought that would have been funny to add to it...
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TF then said, "Well to be honest she is quite a disappointment. I thought she was able to do my bidding and basically do what I say, but she just started to disobey me. So I have to put her down unfortunately."
And TF then looked towards Star and said to her before she died, "And as for you young lady, I hope you should be ashamed of yourself. I mean you had such talent that went to waste. But I have to put you down. Hopefully your sister will show better at obedience than you have. I guess it will be fitting for her codename to be Moon Sparkle. A little dumb, but fitting nonetheless if you ask me. Well, have sweet dreams princess...and good night."
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Bob Tom: Yeah about this part, originally I had planned that Star was going to be killed off and that would be the end of it. But by the time I got to this part, I felt like I could do more with it and expand upon it...but I still wanted her to die, so I kind of compromised and went with her still being dead and there will be another one in the future where it's her sister.
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TF then said, "What? What are you talking about?"
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"Oh yes...that"
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"Well I wanted to test if Knight was suited for the task is all. You know this is why I did all of this and I even proved to you that my plan will work for both of us. You will get to see Equestria be destroyed while I get Knight and kill him. That was our deal from the very beginning."
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"I know, but you must have patients. You must not be too hasty about things like this. Our day will come...you'll see..."
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"Good, glad we got that out of the way. We'll take this step by step...and it will come together all in the end...you'll see. Now if you excuse me, I've got some business to take care of back at Manehatten. I have a little thing to deal with a certain satellite and a newly replaced Godstallion."
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Bob Tom: Yeah at this part I wanted to have a little post credit/whatever thing at the end. I want to do a little something like MGS style a little bit. And of course I am referencing Episode 24, so expect TF to be back for Episode 24 people....especially since I do have all of the plans up...in Plans blog....
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Bob Tom: Well Knight that's it...commentary is over...
Knight: Really...it felt like it was just getting started...
Bob Tom: Well to be fair I had planned on talking about a lot more, but I didn't want to ruin it for the people. There's a lot of stuff I can talk about like my thoughts on why I did the things that I did, but that would ruin some of the experience and I don't want to ruin that for them...because there is sort of a deeper meaning to all of this...I'm not going to say what...but there is if you take a closer look..maybe not on a professional level of deeper meaning...but it's there regardless...
Knight: Well I guess this means that we're done for now until next time...
Bob Tom: Yup...see you around guys...until next time...
~Knight/Bob Tom
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