My story is finally finished. · 3:12am Jul 25th, 2017
Well, after a long time, I was finally able to sit and write the last chapter of my fanfic.
It's been a long journey and I learned a lot about writing. I got a few lessons that I'm taking elsewhere.
I have also developed a new respect for fanfic writers, now that I have seen the time and effort it's required to write a decent fanfic. It's been a lot of work, including research. I have also practiced taking the harshest criticism and bashing, since pretty much every reviewer disliked my fanfic, and they weren't kind in their opinions sometimes. Still, people who found it on their own liked it, and some of them really loved it. I think the majority of people liked it, so I'm satisfied with that.
Anyway, if you are one of the ones who read it or if you are just reading this by any chance, I want to thank you for spending your time reading what I write. I really appreciate it.
I really loved that story, it was in my mind for a very long time :) It made me think about the end and stuff like that... I think I am a bad person and an eternity full of nothingness would fit for me... but I really hope for apple jack, that she will be united with her beloved ones, that idea made me cry in pleasure
There were some really small points of a critic, but even these "mistakes", just belong there and conclude the picture I think.
Also I wanted to ask you if I could use this universe later, for my own FanFic?
EDIT: i mean as long as you dont plan an sequell on your own ^^
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I'm so glad that you liked my story. I didn't want to give definite answers about the afterlife, but present several views and let the reader draw his own conclusions.
Did you really cry? I'm sorry if you did. I updated the warning three times to make it clear that it was a heavy feelz trip, so I don't feel that bad. Plus, it's kind of a compliment, you know?
I'm curious now as what these "mistakes" are. Are they grammar or style mistakes, or do they have something to do with the plot? I would like to hear them if you can share them, even if I'm not planning to make more major changes, just to get feedback.
And YES, YES, YES, you're more than welcome to use this universe for your own fanfic. That'd be like totally awesome and stuff. I don't plan to write a sequel, honestly. I feel like I said what I had to said and it was a lot of work that I'm not looking forward to do again soon. Just link it to the original story, please. If you want, you can PM me with your e-mail and I'll send you the excel file with the timeline that I used to write the story.
Anyway, thank you again for reading my story.
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And the mistakes are little plotholes, like i could not beliefe that fluttershy ever would change from taking care of critters to ponies ^^ bit i like the idea of nurse fluttershy :)
So no real mistakes... maybe i just took the wrong word? In germay we would say “Ungereimtheiten“ ^^