TThe Forest Pony
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Treachery sends Princess Luna tumbling into the Everfree. Stuck, she copes to live among its grisly inhabitants. Survival is not an easy task, she can tell...
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119 weeks
Don't Panic and Carry a Style Guide: Preliminary 1

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123 weeks
I Wanna See Pigs Fly (Finally Saw the G5 Film)

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178 weeks
Creating Compelling Characters

Creating a ‘good’ character is an evergreen topic in many groups on this site, so I thought it might be worth a shot to dedicate another miniguide to it. Here I’ll focus primarily on some aspects of a character’s role in a story and the ways in which these aspects affect character creation. The guide might be also a bit messier than usual as putting together these various tidbits of advice would
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186 weeks
Handling Points of View with Grace

I’m pretty sure that all of you have read more than one story in your life, and I’d bet that most of you noticed that stories can be told from a variety of perspectives. If you prefer a somewhat fancier term, such a perspective can be also called a point of view (POV for short). Types of POVs, their usage, and common pitfalls are what’s this miniguide going to be about. Just like in case of the
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199 weeks
Story Titles, Cover Art, and Descriptions 101

Imagine this: You wrote a story that you deem great. You may have even shown it to a few folks for beta-reading and might have it edited, so the fact the story ain’t bad is most likely not just your subjective perception. Then you publish the story. Nothing happens. No comments, a modicum of votes, and a few views. Maybe it’s just bad luck. Or maybe the story’s boring and fails to maintain the
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Jun

25th

2017

Luna's misadventures continue! · 7:37pm Jun 25th, 2017

After nearly half a year, a new chapter of The Forest Pony is finally up.
My old editor left in February because of some personal real life issues, so there is a new editor now. And it's not just a mere replacement, but the mightiest of the mighty editors, MV. I think I can tell there is noone better than him, when it comes to combing through a story
In the meantime, I also went throught the chapters, clarifying, changing and adding both descriptions and actions, based on Azure Drache's minireviews. The plot stayed all the same, only minor details were tackled. You don't need to read through it all again.
Last but not least, many fights with GIMP later, I managed to create a new cover art: