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    Art Friend Looking for Commissions!

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    Thank you!

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    Trotcon!

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    Moving for Summer Internship

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Mar
30th
2017

Entropy · 6:59pm Mar 30th, 2017

So. Entropy. I tried to improve it by making it longer, but so far it doesn't seem like it's going so well, and it's been a pain and an unenjoyable struggle to try and write it, so I'm debating just re-releasing the original chapter and either taking down the poorly written 'rewrite' chapters, or slapping a hiatus on the thing until I feel able to 're-rewrite' it better.

Not to mention, when I write it out fully, it feels much more like I'm just beating the happiness and quirkiness out of his character in favor of a reformed, mannered person. He loses his individuality and what really makes him who he is, which to be honest, I really dislike, which adds to my difficulty in writing this story.

What do you guys think?

Options:
1.) Re-release the original chapter, un-release the trash I added to it, mark completed.
2.) Re-release the original chapter, keep the other chapters as well and stick hiatus on it.
3.) Take down everything I have on it now and attempt a larger, stronger, better rewrite.
4.) Keep it up as-is, mark hiatus or incomplete, and continue the way it is.
5.) Whatever other option you can think of- feel free to provide if you've got one I haven't listed.

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