Checking in! · 9:49pm Mar 21st, 2017
So! I hope to have the next chapter (and likely conclusion) to Inoculation up in the next day or two.
But! In the meanwhile, I've made a minor tweak to the beginning of chapter 2 that makes the story theoretically a little better structured. I suppose that's one of the advantages of fanfic 'publishing' of this sort. Especially for a writer (such as myself) who's more or less making things up as they go along (such as I'm doing).
But then again, Inoculation is blowing up the charts, so I guess folks like that sorta thing?
Inoculation hits all sorts of nice comedic spots with just a leaven of serious heart to it.
And now, I got to re-read the 2nd chapter to see if I can notice what you tweaked!