Chapter 3 is done, but... · 7:18pm Dec 20th, 2016
As the title suggests, I finished chapter 3 yesterday afternoon, however, I'm not happy with parts of it. As such, I'm currently working to rewrite the parts I didn't like, and will wait to release it until I'm happy with the final product. As a bit of an apology for the wait, I'll include a small section from the next chapter.
I was broken out of my thoughts by the sound harsh whispering directly outside my door.
“... are you doing? It’s the middle of the night, and the patients need their sleep!” I recognized the voice of the doctor that had originally brought me in. “What business do you have, causing such a ruckus in the middle of the night.”
“I’m sorry, sir.” A very deep, very official sounding voice answered back. “My partner and I were given orders to make sure the colt’s room is secure, and to post ourselves at his door so that only hospital staff may enter.”
‘Hold on, what?'
“What, but why? It’s late, you couldn’t have done this in the morning?” The doctor asked.
“No, sir, it could not have waited. I am not at liberty to answer any of your questions, however my C.O. should be arriving shortly to fill you in.”
‘C.O.? Not at liberty to discuss? From the way he’s talking, he must be a guard or something.’
The door to the room clicked open, and a large white unicorn stallion clad in gold armor walked into the room. His horn gave off a pale yellow light, and I quickly closed my eyes, pretending to be asleep. After a few moments of silence, I slowly opens my eyes and saw that the unicorn was now looking at the window, which was engulfed in the same pale yellow light his horn gave off. Casting one more glance my way, the light from his horn extinguished and he left the room, the door clicking shut behind him.
I apologize again for the wait, and hope the preview was intriguing for y'all!
