Edited Fragments · 7:25am Oct 24th, 2016
As in, added more descriptions to the scenes, fixed some grammar errors, and overall made it a little less clunky. I've also started on the third chapter, finally. Keep an eye out for the update.
It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.
As in, added more descriptions to the scenes, fixed some grammar errors, and overall made it a little less clunky. I've also started on the third chapter, finally. Keep an eye out for the update.