Yet another update

The Power Within - Mature/Gore

I know it's been few weeks without new chapters and for that I'm very sorry about. I don't want to say that the story is on a hiatus state, but at the moment I have had a really hard time continuing it. Fortunately, I can say that not that many people are reading it so no harm is done. Though it's also a bit demotivating thing. There's really nothing driving me to write it any further.

The problem is that I simply can't decide how to continue the story after 3rd chapter. I mean, I have at least 3 ways to go and I don't know what to do. I know what'll happen afterward, but for now, I'm stuck. If you are reading the story, I'd appreciate some feedback. What are you expecting from the story?

Thanks for reading :)

Comments

[Shimmering Thunder]

4395546 Yeah, I like that too, but sometimes it's hard to choose just one. That 4th chapter sure was the pain in the flank, but then I somehow wrote that and the next chapter like a lightning. I really enjoyed writing them and I guess that's what really counts.

This story has changed quite a bit since I started while I thought I had it all planned out. I had it all on a paper, but as I started to write the story, it just kept changing. There are still few hints left on the first two chapters what my original plan was. I haven't got around to change them yet and I don't know if I will either.

To be honest, I don't know how the story is going to end. I have been thinking to make two separate endings, but I don't know. I guess that It depends what my readers would consider as a "tragedy". My definition would be quite the same as on this site, but I won't spoil too much