One year · 11:07pm Aug 6th, 2016
A year ago today I decided take a leap of faith and publish my first chapter of The Right that Returns. As the year moved forward I was astounded by the level support. let it be from coments saying great chapter to the PM's that of helpful tips and corrections. All of this made want to continue onward and make my story better, that's why I've been rewriting the chapters 1-6.
Along this year long journey way I picked up pre-readers and editors who helped to make my story even better than ever. So a Big Thank you to all these awesome Guys and Girls who make my story possible, Lucky Star 33094, Shielded Myth, Lunar Republic is Epic, catcatpuss66, Stone_Mason, Commander Darklight, Erina Tail Yellow. Check them out you might find something you like.
Now on to looking forward. As some of you know I am in my third year of college. That said I won't have time a lot of free time to wright. So here's the deal I will try to get a chapter out every 1-2 months. The chapter 8 The Start of a Change is ~22% complete and chapter 4 Along Time Coming rewrite is 20% complete. Both chapter should be done by the end of the month.
Till then Thank You to everyone for your support and help and I hope you stick around for another year.
With love, Febnic16.
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DId you honestly think I would leave a sneak out?
Chapter 4 Along Time Coming rewrite Rewrite
Twilight Velvet moved over to Trixie and place her left hand on Trixie’s shoulder. “No matter how long that sands of have passed nor distance apart, you will always be my daughter.” In Velvet’s and Trixie’s right hands a blue spiral cloud appeared.
Chapter 8 The Start of a Change
Silver looked away before they opened the doors. But she still felt the warm summer winds and the room was bathed in the golden velvet of the early afternoon sun. Silver spoon let the mop’s handle fall on her shoulder, as she tried to cover her ears to block out all the sounds of the world. But still some snaked in.
i for one cant freak wait for the rewrite and next chapter