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Arctikfox


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  • 1 week
    Story Ending

    Hi! It's been quite a while and for the longest while I have REALLY wanted to do a rewrite or to continue, but tonight in my further development of my IRL dnd campaign and the reading of comments on the story that I'm sorry to say have severely neglected I regret to say that this story is now a part of my history and no longer part of my identity. I have accepted much responsibility irl as an

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    3 comments · 340 views
  • 318 weeks
    Murky Water

    Okay, chapter is up and should be somewhat fixed. The edits seem to have stayed which means im going on to the next chapter which should be out in the next day or 2, it's a beefy one so I gotta go over it a couple times. This way Skyfall comes back and the arc's finale will move into full swing. Then, the next arc.

    This is just a blog giving yall an update :ajsmug:

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  • 322 weeks
    So, end of the line, kinda~

    I've been quiet for the past few months so I figure it's time to at least say something. I'll try to get right down to the point and not bore you with needless stuff. I'm still interested in my stories and the show itself, but it's my interest in the fandom that's nearly gone.

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    17 comments · 1,318 views
  • 332 weeks
    Dealing With Snakes in Spades

    Pointless rant incoming

    (Shattered Skies chapter releases wednesday, the need to know releases a week from wednesday)

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    3 comments · 547 views
  • 333 weeks
    The Hanged Man

    Not an overly important blog

    I pay attention to what you all say in the comments and after this last chapter I have seen some concern regarding the ending of chapter 46.

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    9 comments · 689 views
Jul
2nd
2016

This anime was a trip · 1:00am Jul 2nd, 2016

Sorry for any confusion. I love ya :heart:

Me v. this story

p.s. I wrote this like thirty minutes ago and spent a half hour giggling like a moron at anime gifs.

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Comments ( 6 )

That's good. The gifs that you put into your blogs are funny.

Yeah... I almost stopped reading and disliked Shattered Skies based solely on how much I hated the first chapter. Luckily I have the policy of reading at least the first two chapters of a story before disliking it. As a result, Shattered Skies is now my favorite story on fimfiction.

4062036 Well, the long and short of it. A user named Stlat commented on my story talking about the grammar and story usage and basically roasted me a little, so I was like 'aww hell naw, Ima reread my story to see what he was talking about' I can say I actually choked on my tea when I read it and I am forced to agree with Stlat. He was right, it was a trainwreck. I freaked out and went to my drive and saw that the transfer likely didn't occur.

But I can't blame it on the transfer because even in the edited version there were glaring typos and mistakes. Like 'an fire exploded' :facehoof:

My writing has gotten better since September, but that wreck was... that, a wreck.

Shattered Skies is now my favorite story on fimfiction.

:yay: :heart:

so another rewrite or this only chapter your going to rewrite?

4062167 No rewrite. No more rewrites, I'll die from the frustration. Just rewording what is there to make it flow better. Like I mentioned in the blog, it was embarrassing, the mistakes I made, so I cleaned it.

I agree the first chapter and prologue needed some fixings, I'm still annoyed that you didn't release a new chapter. I was excited for nearly four hours.

So hurry up (at your own pace) and get us more readings!

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