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Manes


Coffe a day, keeps the world around me grey.

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  • 316 weeks
    It's Over

    (I'm not killing myself. I'm just logging off here because I need to get my life on track. So this is the last time you'll see a blog, story or even a word from me. Sorry for the scare.)

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  • 316 weeks
    Thanks Guys

    Thanks guys for the kind messages. At the time, I was feeling alone and depressed to the point I wanted to hide from everyone and just vanish without a trace, but seeing this helped me a bit with the issues. I didn't make the other blog because I wanted attention or a cry for help, but to be honest I really wanted to vanish.

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    I Might Be Gone Forever

    Due to personal issues, I might not ever come back online when I sign off. I might come back on later, but all knows. I'm sorry to do this to all of you, but it's for the best.

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  • 319 weeks
    Good news!

    I managed to get internet from my big brother giving me his hot spot password. So I can write Higher Senses now~ I decided to make chapter eight into two parts since it's taking long to write all in one. Plus it'll feel less...stuffed.

    So the first part should come out soon. I don't know when, but hopefully soon.

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  • 319 weeks
    So

    So Good news I found a place to live for the time being. Bad news it's in a room....inside a house with other people.

    Yay me right?

    So Im currently using a tablet to reach you guys so expect no update anytime soon because internet cost money folks. Sorry. I'll be writing on Google docs off online like the poor person I am. Til next time folks!

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Jun
6th
2016

Small, But Progress! · 10:02am Jun 6th, 2016

Chapter eight minor spoilers.

Scootaloo’s eyes drooped lower and lower each passing second Twilight talked. The fight to stop them was an effortless fight. She closed them just for a second before opening them again.


Scootaloo yawned and shook herself awake.


The poor batpony had lost track of time. All train of thought was lost, but yet her ears had to remain active. Even with her enhanced hearing, words came out as, “And the blah blah went to the blah blah blah!” One could never question how any pony could make a limited source of information so long.


“So boring….must….resist sleep!”


Her head banged on the desk when her face slipped from her hoof pillow. Her eyes shot opened with a shout, “I’m awake!”


Twilight’s eyes narrowed. “Scootaloo.”


If Twilight found out she spaced out during the lecture, the punishment was endless. The one that scared her the most was the flashcards Twilight would have her answer.


A pencil and a paper sat right in front of her face, Perfect. She stacked them and placed it back on the desk. Her hooves folded themselves together and a huge, friendly fang smile took over her face.


“You wasn’t paying any attention were you?” Twilight said with a bemused look.


Scootaloo scrunched her nose. "I was,” she said, turning away.


Twilight scoffed with the roll of her eyes. “Honestly, is this how you act in class?”


“No, sir!” she shouted as she saluted the confused alicorn. She giggled, but stopped when Twilight groaned through her frown.


Her smile dropped as her hoof, hitting the desk. “Ugh, I’ll listen!” A small squee came from alicorn as she picked up the stick and resumed the lesson.

Once again, Scootaloo reverts back to her old lesson hating self....not for long. *Laughs as he twirls his mustache*

The beginning was inspired by this.

Minus Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom of course.

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Comments ( 3 )

Nice, nice - proceed. I wonder if we get it before the next weekend...

One thing.

The fight to stop them was an effortless fight.

This doesn't make much sense. First, using the same word twice in one sentence sounds awkward, and second, calling it 'effortless' means that it's really easy, which is obviously not what you meant. If it were me, I'd have written:

The fight to keep them open was a losing battle.

... or something like that.

4002502 Thanks I knew something was off with that sentence.

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