Shit my Editor's Write - Major and Minor edition

Spoilers ahead for those who have not read Major and Minor. This blog post also contains crude humor, if you don't like that, then I would suggest you do not go any further.

Throughout the writing of my fics I rely on my editor's to help make the story what it is, not every suggestion however is accepted. These are the rejected suggestions:

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In case anyone was wondering, no. Vinyl and Derpy are not going to be in a relationship.

Comments

[ChibiChabot]

This is awesome. I love your editors.

[Lady Froey]

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It's always good to have some fun, especially during a sad fic. :C

[Manes]

I love these. Always have me rolling on the floor.

[Lady Froey]

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I had to delete the original one due to the imgur incident, I still have the screencaps however so I may remake the original blog post later.

[Luminary]

This is improper. Both the nouns and the verbs!

The 1976 one made me snicker. It was unexpected as hell.

[gardrek]

These are cracking me up!

And then Vinyl was sad, because it was true.

And then John was a zombie.

[Lady Froey]

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...You wrote some of them.

[gardrek]

3800496 I only remember writing one of these.

[Private_Ghost]

A version of Major and Minor needs to be released with all of the editorial comments on them. That would be hilarious.