• Member Since 28th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen 4 hours ago

Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

More Blog Posts686

  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

    Read More

    3 comments · 122 views
  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

    Read More

    7 comments · 161 views
  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

    Read More

    1 comments · 95 views
  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

    Read More

    4 comments · 131 views
  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

    Read More

    4 comments · 130 views
Feb
16th
2016

Unleash the Magic - Chapter 10 draft complete! · 5:04pm Feb 16th, 2016

Awaiting final preread before posting. Titled "Midnight Daydream", this is the climactic chapter in more ways than one, folks... you all wanted SunLight, you're going to get it. In spades. It's going to be the longest chapter of the story, and quite deservedly. :rainbowwild:

A teaser? Well... okay. But nothing suggestive. That's best saved for the full chapter so it can hit full force. :twilightsmile:


“Midnight,” I called to my counterpart calmly, breaking the silence of the short standoff between us. All eyes were upon us, but they didn’t matter. The only ones that did were on the face of the young goddess before me; the only equal I now had in either world. The only one who understood or could understand the burden I now carried…

And the only one I now had any eyes for. “Look around you. I know you can sense this. We can’t let this continue. The two worlds can’t take this, and even if they could, they’re not ready for this… any more than you were for this power.” I knew she probably wouldn’t take that well, but I still had to say it. “I don’t want to hurt you, Midnight. But I will stop you.” My horn glowed brightly as I charged my hands with power. I could seal the portals right then and there, but I did not—for I first needed to return our Equestrian guests to their world. “And I will do so by showing you a magic you do not yet possess.”

Midnight predictably reacted as a child being threatened with the loss of her favorite toy. “No, Daydream,” she hissed out my new game, gathering her power in response, her horn glowing in anticipation of a duel with me, one that would decide the fate of both worlds. “I don’t care about your so-called friendship—what did it ever do for me? Out of the two realms, I’ll make a new one—one with science and magic; one I can mold and I will be the master of!” she proclaimed.

“Knowledge beyond belief and power beyond measure! This is what have been searching for my entire life! It’s everything I’ve ever wanted! And now that I have it, I won’t let you stop me!” she shouted and suddenly charged a massive beam, firing it at me, forcing to counter with one of my own in defense. I was initially knocked back on my high boot heels—and just why the hell did my magic give me those?

Despite our equal power, I was at a disadvantage—I could say I didn’t want to hurt Midnight, or Twilight within her, but Midnight was not so restrained. She hit me with everything she had, and through her sheer willpower I felt my own magic being turned back on me, our battle beginning to fray things further as the uglier rifts began to open again.

Just as I was seriously considering cutting loose myself, movement to my left caught my eye, a small green-and-purple shape in the upper branches of a tree, now clinging to a thinning branch and trying to get further out even as his weight began to bow it down.

It was Spike! Through sheer determination, Twilight’s now-sentient pet dog had finally found a way in over the wall, climbing vines and branches in a feat he shouldn’t even have been capable of. And now he was climbing out on the further branch of a tree, trying desperately to reach her…

Even risking falling into a portal to do it. “Twilight! STOP!!!!” Spike cried out, tears streaming down his face as he saw what his master—no, his friend—had become. “This isn’t you! Please! No more!”

Midnight’s eyes shifted and her expression dropped; for just a moment her eyes and voice were again that of Twilight—not Midnight! “Sp-Spike?” she recognized him and her focus faltered, confusion suddenly on her face...

Comments ( 5 )

Remember: Your only inhuman if you don't feel anything reading this one

“Knowledge beyond belief and power beyond measure! This is what have been searching for my entire life! It’s everything I’ve ever wanted! And now that I have it, I won’t let you stop me!”

I remember when I met someone like this. You know what I did? I beat her 1337-speaking butt and took her gym badge. You don't know what I'm talking about? OK, then check this thing out... enter at your own peril.
Well, can't wait for sexiness. See ya.

3758516 I'll admit, I got a bit misty. It's a very touching moment between the two of them. This is a damn good story! I just wish I found it a bit hotter. Damn aversion to humanized... :fluttercry:

I look forward to commenting on it!

3758643 Yeah, Reborn is one of the more... unique fan games.

Login or register to comment