Of course, this birthday is a little more melancholy seeing as how it's the first one since I lost my father last year.Where Is Everyone? · 5:43pm Feb 14th, 2016
To everyone out there, first off, Happy Valentine's Day. To celebrate the occasion, I've posted a new chapter of 'Where's The Love?', which I have to say, I'm surprised isn't getting a lot of comments. Ironic that the story's name is becoming its popularity. What's wrong people? Is my writing terrible? I though the premise of the episode was a clever one. Of course, if you're all dodging it because of the FlashLight pairing, then I have to say that you're not being fair. I've read stories that contained pairings I didn't like because either it had another pairing I liked or it was a good story, such as DisneyFanatic's 'Bride of Discord' series. I'm asking you all to give my story a chance. Seriously, you have no idea what you're missing. To my fellow FlutterDash shippers, at least do it to see the coupling of our two favorite pegasi.
Pwease?
I just haven't been on here much...
Guess I can check it out at some point soon now that I know about it.
Sorry; but my "might read" ponyfic collection in Calibre was over 180 million words at last count, and I'm not even done assembling it. And this story isn't even in it; I use my Read It Later list here to watch for stories to be completed, and save them when (if) they are. Sorry again, but I don't like reading part of a story and then having to wait impatiently for updates that might not come.
I hope you manage to get good feedback from the people who have read it.
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Well, I want you to know that I'm going to try to more constant with my updates, so if you ever decide to check it out, now that it will be finished.
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Unfortunately, I don't know you well enough to take your word on that. But good luck.
It usually takes me a few days to get to reading updates.
Yeah sorry most of your stuff had been on my read later list... cause I literally have no free time these days. Though I was really interested in "I'm foreign?!" and managed to read what you've got. I think you are doing well but often leaving out significant details. For example you introduce the erm, clerk or the pony behind the counter without really describing said pony at all in the scene
3754055 How goes the crazy busy life?
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Well, I'm currently working on the third chapter of "I'm Foreign?!". Hopefully, you'll find it's getting better. Of course, there are other stories where a pony's name isn't mentioned. Anyway, I hope it won't be long before you find time to read the stories I've been updating.
3764416 I mean describe this pony not necessarily name her... i.e physical appearance. It'll also beef up that short scene a little more if you do so.
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I took your advice and made a few touch ups to that scene. Oh, and for the record, the immigrations official is a stallion.
3772883 Duly noted. I know it can be tricky deciding how to balance your show/tell.
I'm dodging because Flash Sentry is my most despised character.