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MasterBrony Forever


Hey! I writer anything with my favorite characters, Spike, Ember, Smolder, Discord, Fizzle, Garble...that is most of works and coming works.

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  • 98 weeks
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  • 138 weeks
    Story Bonus Chapters and Sequals

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  • 143 weeks
    New Stories in Pipeline

    Hello! It has been a while.

    Me and beirirangu have been dealing with some IRL stuff as of late but we have been working on a few stories when we can. Hopefully we can share them with you soon.

    One story will be going up later today in fact! A Spike x Celestia story. Hope you all are looking forward to that~

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Dec
16th
2015

Future Updates · 2:44am Dec 16th, 2015

Sorry for the lack of update over the past few weeks. Yet I will try to keep all of you in the loop for future story updates and things of that nature, or things you just want answers to.

Now for the point of this blog.

I am still working on the last chapter of "Doggy Style", and that is right, the next chapter of "Doggy Style" will be the last. It should be out by before years end so I hope you all are looking forward it.

Next on the list is "The Rise of Spike the Dragon", this is one of the stories that sky rocked my followers and things like that. I do plan to finish it but it will not be until after I go back and fix everything I find wrong with it. Thanks to a certain someone, this story has derailed completely from what I had originally intended. It was only suppose to have about 20 Chapters, maybe less and because of the poor direction of the story it has been put into a lot of hate groups. Don't know how these groups are still around on this site, seeing as hate groups are not aloud, but I digress.

I will be going back and fix the story and it will remain on Hiatus until I have fixed everything. Then I shall take down all the chapters to a certain point, replace the old chapters with the new ones then make them public again. I will fix many of the plot holes and issues and things may come out totally different from the way they are now.

Next is "Changes for the Better", this story still gets people liking and faving it even though it hasn't been updated in years. It was my first fic, back when I was new to the fandom and had a shitting Alicorn OC which I have since changed into a normal Unicorn. Which means I am gonna have to CANCEL that story. It is dead, and with my new OC, and the fact that I hav grown as a writing going back and trying to finish that would be pointless. I never wanted to cancel a story but this one I have to.

There is one last thing I need to bring up, the clopfic request. If you have been around long enough people knew at one point I was taking request to get some experience writing some sexy pony clop. Yet because of school and life at the time and more popular stories I had to stop. Since then, the requests have all be noted, but I need to see if the requester are still active on the site. If they have been done for a certain amount of time I will remove their request from the roster seeing as they will not be coming back. If they are all gone it will be labeled as complete.

Thank you all for sticking with me so far.

Comments ( 18 )

Ha! You got your story on hate groups? I'd love to see how pathetic they are.

Doggy Style is awesome though, it could have been one chapter but you made another and it was fantastic. Usually when people expand on their one-shots they turn really shitty as they try to catch the fame.

3621379 Do you mean the groups on my stories...:ajbemused:

And I did it because people wanted it, and I wanted to do more with it too. Your right I could have left it as a single chapter but, I already wanted to do more to get a certain ending, and I am able to do that now.

Sorry to hear about you stuff being in hate groups.
So after Doggy Style is done any other stories staring humans with FiM races planned?

people need to look at this story and follow in it's footsteps, we need more stories with a human interacting with races other than ponies

3621759 Maybe, I have leanred thanks to this story I can write that style of story better, so I may experiment more with other races in the future.
3621931 Yeah seeing them with other races would be nice. Yet sometimes the people who do put them with other races don't do it well from what I have read.

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Awesome. If you ever do so I will be looking forward to it.
On that note you seem to have an interest in dragons, so maybe that could be the next experiment.

You have a point there. Many just go with clichés based on the very little bit of examples from the show. Such as making entire races evil, or just casting them in very negative ways. At least there are a few good gems, such as Feathered Hearts. The author of that story is doing some amazing world building for the gryphons.

3622065 Yeah, and I have some inspiration to go off of with a story like this. Granted it is a Fizzle x Male Anon inspiration I will see what people what people want to see the most.

And well the show pants every nation except Equestria in a negative light, and make Equestria seem too perfect. And most people don't want to build a world on their own, or build on that races more then what was already present to them. Demon Eyes Laharl has a universe he has put together, The Gentlemanverse, and he already has rules and things in place. So that helps him with things like this. I am not doing that, I am not trying to make a a hole universe where several stories can take place in. They hopefully will stay separate from one another, and allow me to change the rules as I need for the story.

And I know I will never be able to full recreate the success of "Doggy Style". No matter how hard I try XD

I would find such a story interesting to read. I quite like that dragon, thanks to fan art.
If you do that leave it more like a casual poll, so that people don't take it as you taking requests. You know, something to just get a general idea of what people would be interested in without any actual promise to write such.

True.

Might be so. Still as long as a story gets any kind of success it could be considered a victory.

3622118 Yeah, at the end of this one I will ask what people want to see more from a human x Dragon Fic and which dragon they would like to see Anon with the most. It is going to be Male Human X Male Dragon written from the Male Human perspective, or Male Human and female dragoness once again written from the perspective of the human male, or male dragon and human female written of the perspective of the male dragon.

I will only write from a male perspective seeing as I have experience with that, and am a male myself. So it would be easier, while a female and female story would be poorly written coming from me and a bore and pain to write, seeing as I can't write them. And it will be difficult for me to enjoy writing it seeing I don't find anything hot about it.

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When that journal/poll gets put up I will be sure to cast my vote(s).

That is understandable. Better to write in a way that you have experience with, along with writing what you actually find interesting

3622158 I look forward to seeing what you and others would like to see the most.

And that is how I wrote "Doggy Style". I wrote from how I would deal with the situation or how your average Joe would if he was fine with sexing up a Diamond Dog with an amazingly perfect rear.

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Just a heads up though, don't be surprised if suggestions for either rule63, and dragon versions of ponies show up there.

And it really did work out perfectly.

3622167 I was planning using a rule 63 version of one of them anyways. xD

Roxy is the Rule63 versions Rover, the dog with the red jacket from the show xD
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Oh. Should be really interesting to see who, when you post that story.
On that note, you should look up an artist called Avante92. He has made some really good MLP FiM dragon fanart. Both rule63, and dragon versions of ponies.


Really? I just assumed she was just a female Diamond Dog based on general fan art.
I didn't even think that that picture was a rule63 one.

3622200 Yeah, I know him. And I think I know what dragon I might pick if it is male Human and female dragoness.

And really? I thought I did a pretty good job at describing her. xD Anyways, now you know XD

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I think I have an idea idea of who you might pick. But I will just wait to see if I am right.

Yeah. Sometimes I am obvious.

3624352 Well I have like 3 dragons I may pick from, but that will also be up to the readers.

lol xD

if your planning on fixing the plot holes in rise of spike the dragon, i have some sugestions for ya: maybe rewrite the story/origin of radiant and the scale six a little. u can keep the part where she kills there mothers and they in turn seek revenge but in the final battle when radiant reverts them back to eggs,she was just about crush the eggs when her mother ,empress faust, appears and is not very happy with her daughter`s...recent activities. so she punishes radiant by magicly turning her into a gentler,kinder mare named celestia and will stay like this for a very long time (luna was still a toddler when all this was happening). this is only a temporary solutian however as the spell wont last forever and celestia still retains some of radiant`s xenophobia and manipulative ways. by the time luna became nightmare moon and defeated her sister, radiant uses this opportunity to take over and gives nightmare a no holds barred beatdown and sent her sorry flank to the moon (luna has no memory of this),then the elements of harmony appeared and forcibly changed radiant back into celestia (this was there original function as faust knew her eldest daughter would one day revert back into a paranoid tyrant) and altering her memories making tia believe that she used the elements to banish her sister to the moon. so by the time the story starts and spike runs away, the spell starts to weaken and celestia is slowly but surly reverting back to radiant and this time not even the elements can stop her.

u can also make the reason why the scale six dont talk about there fathers is because spike had a very tense relationship with his, they rarely saw eye to eye and hardly agree on anything. so when they found out who killed there mothers and spike wants radiant`s head on a platter, his dad on the other hand thinks they should try to negotiate first, the two dueled and the father won, but just when the fathers are about to take off spike calls his a gutless coward but says nothing in return.

one more thing, have twilight call her mentor out after the incident in the everfree, telling celestia that if she have just told her or at the very least her parents and/or cadence about spike`s real origins years ago and not been so forcefull at bringing him back then none of this probably woudnt have happen, thus causing a fallout between mentor and student and the two hadnt spoke to each other since.

well those are my ideas tell me what think though as this your story afterall.

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