Problems · 1:51am Nov 17th, 2015
Soooo...
I have started the next chapter of Barbzilla 2, but...
I don't like it.
I'm not fond of what I've done with it.
I'm beginning to regret the idea for this story... again.
I mean, it just doesn't feel like the first one any more. It feels too dialogue heavy, and once again I'm feeling fairly lacking when it comes to writing sex.
In other news, I've had an idea for another clopfic, involving (sigh) a human traveling to Equestria.
As much as I hate that genre in general, I do like the concept I have for it so far.
I've also been working on another, non-pony story project called Altermage. Basically, if you were a fan of my Corruption of Champions crossover, you might like it. I've had an idea for my own flash game along the lines of CoC, TiTS, etc. But since I have no idea how to make something like that, I'm settling for making a series of stories showing the sort of things to expect in it. I guess I'll be posting them to FurAffinity once I'm done with them.
Anyway, that's that.
Note: If anyone would be willing to look over the chapter for Barbzilla 2 to give me some pointers, I'd appreciate it. Any advice would be good.
I might know of something that'll help you with writing your sex scenes.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u3IBfEhZphU4uJnxvVnHBXT73CP93dW3J3fSFE_-NXA/edit?usp=sharing
Take a look at that and see if you can get anything out of it.
3547437 Eh, not really. I was already using most of those terms.
It's not really a lack of terms, it's more not knowing exactly what to do with them. I'm trying to describe a lesbian sex scene, but I'm lacking in knowledge about what that entails. I can picture it, but I can't write a scene involving it that goes for more than a few paragraphs.
I lack knowledge of how to write sex itself.
(Although I will say after reading one of Megapone's stories my inspiration has come back somewhat, letting me get back into writing it a little.)
Honestly, I'm just not that strong a writer.