What Do You Think?

Hello my fellow readers!

I'd really appreciate it if you would give me some feedback on 'A Dash of Happiness Soared Through the Skies'

Do you like it? Do you hate it? What do you think? I want to know!

What do you want to happen next? Some of you might know, but I'm literally winging it as I go! (Haha, that rhymed! ) There is no specific plot line right now, but there might be one in the future! So, what do you want to see happen?

Well, until next time!

-Crystal Heart

Comments

[MLPdior]

Amazing story I love it
You should keep the plot spontaneous
Keep you the great work
I support you

[flaminkomage]

3542560 Wow! Thanks so much!!

[Phoenix Nebula]

I think the story could use some dram through a very serious situation. Give it this feeling like there is something more like someone pulling at the strings that makes the readers wonder who it is that is causing all the trouble.

Another thing to really increase the drama is if the two got separated or Dash accidentally gets pregnant. This puts the main characters in a tough life changing situation that really hooks people.

In short you need a major conflict that ether makes the story dark, dramatic, or mysterious. Even trying a combination of them all could work. In fact if its a conflict that affects all the characters in the story that isn't solved near the end of the story is usually the tasty fat of the story so to say. So any big conflict you can think of should do.

[flaminkomage]

3550868 Hmm... Good points.

From the two suggestions, I am planning on one of them. But, don't worry, that will be coming in later parts of the story.

Thanks for letting me know!