Looking for a few proofreaders for A Deeper Change · 4:28am Nov 13th, 2015
Hello everyone! As you can probably tell from the title, I've decided to continue my little tale of Twilight's fall into the embrace of Queen Chrysalis, and all the conflict, subversion, and revelation that must surely follow. I've actually been working on and off on the next chapter for several months now, but just recently I've been having trouble. I feel like I'm dragging out my world building to an unnecessary degree, and I still have quite a bit more to do, but I feel as though what I've got needs some trimming. Thus, I'm looking for a few people to look at what I've got so far that I might listen to their input. I know that some of you have expressed interest in doing just that, and if that's still the case, I'd sure appreciate it. I'll be happy to share what I plan to write in this chapter but haven't yet, as well as places that I feel are bloated but aren't sure where to cut from. Any help that y'all could offer would be much appreciated, and, naturally, I'd add you to my list of contributors in the story's description.
Thank you to any who are interested!
*raises hand* here to help!
It would be an honor and a privilege.
Yaaaaay Can I help? :3
I greet this news with anticipation and trepidation all at once.
Well, I'd definitely be glad to help with proofreading.
Looking forward to the next chapter, Hopefully I'll have mine out before then.
After seeing and reading 'Changeling Courtship Rituals' from the feature box, I decided to go on a Twisalis binge, and discovered your story. I saw the last update was in march, and almost didn't click. Seeing this now, i am so glad I didn't. The hype is real.
Good luck, I guess.
If you want Russian POV on your story, then I want help you.
If you need someone to nitpick ever little grammical error, I happily offer my assistance.
I’m still VERY interested in help, and well, the recient chapters give some ideas :D