2 Year Mark (Almost) · 12:02am Oct 27th, 2015
Wow, it's been nearly two years since I've started writing... Feels like I haven't done much here but whatever.
So, with that being said I'm going to try and push out a certain fic I discussed with another user a while ago on my second anniversary. Here's a small excerpt from my newest story I'm drafting.
The stallion walked towards the middle of the throne room, his eyelids dropping slightly, showing his weariness. He trudged forward, never breaking eye contact with the princess.
"As the last petitioner of the Night Court, I grant you the privilege of speaking for as long as thou wishes," announced Princess Luna. Her deep blue eyes settled on the earth pony before her throne, peering down upon him from high above her lunar throne. She watched as he composed himself, adjusting the ragged coat that was wrapped around his frame.
"I come with a rather simple, yet demanding request, my dearest Princess Luna," he said.
"And what would thou ask of us, our loyal subject?" Despite his leveled tone, Luna felt a deep sense of importance within the green stallion's words.
"I'm not to ask for bits, and I'm not here to beg for a small favor," he said, running a hoof along the zipper of his gray jacket.
"Pray tell, what is thou's request so that I may help ease your mind?"
The stallion opened his mouth, ready to convey his thoughts to the di-arch of the Equestrian realm. Completely unaware of what he would set into motion this very night.
My mind wandered into dirty places thinking about what this stallion would ask Luna.
Anyway, congrats. I got pretty drunk when I celebrated my first year of work on my fic, so I know what it's like. Cheers!
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It's supposed to be ambiguous, the reader's mind interprets as to what he's going to ask for from Luna.
Two years eh? Time sure flies!!