Okay, once more, from the top.

Revised chapter up!
Go check it out, see what you all think.

Comments

[BradtheBrony]

I was fine with the original version, as were tons of other folks. The minority complained constantly which made it seem like more folks than there really were disliked it.

Now I WOULD'VE complained about the Programmer-God Mode and Anthro thing had this been the final chapter of the story (much like I did for your Tirek story's original ending *and to an extent the dropping of the built up relationship with the leading unicorn mare for a changling that just came out of left field that you still kept*)... but again, that was for the ENDING. Because these (now no longer applicable) Anthro stuff happened in a story still in progress, I wasn't worried as I figured you had some crazy overthetop ideas in mind.

Anyways, the new changes aren't bad, and I still look forward to future chapters. Just thought I'd let you know not everyone was upset with events as you originally had them.

[shinikage]

to be honest i liked the original more