Oct
11th
2015
The mark of Eran. · 5:29pm Oct 11th, 2015
So, I finally managed to get all the chapters out.
As I said when I started the release of this story, this is my last big project on this site.
You might see an off short story coming from me now and then, but nothing big.
I've more or less stopped following the show, so in terms of fanmade stuff I have very little to bring to the table anymore.
Thank you all for following me and giving me encouragement to create the world in my stories. It has been an extreme amount of fun to bring it to life for all of you.
If you have any question about the story, please ask them here, so to keep the story clear of jumbles in the comment section.
It has been a privilege.
Cheers!
So... is Trixie a Linac now?
3461938 Well, if she was alive, it wouldn't be a primal beast like a linac.
More like... perhaps, Sombra.
Thank you for the stories that you have shared with us. I wish you luck in your future endeavors. Please keep us all updated with your writings because, pony or nonpony, I enjoy your writing style.
Keep being awesome Tofazz.
Also, sorry for not talking to you in ages. I'm terrible with keeping up contacts; however that's done properly.
Figured I'd say hi though.
Well, thank you for producing content.
And inspiring me to write.
Will you let us know if you ever intend to continue the series of Eran?
3511928 I do intend to continue the story.
I've grown too fond of those characters to not do that.
However, the continued story will not be ponified, rather, it will be a proper release somewhere in a galaxy, far far away.
Cheers!
What a wonderful story! Especially knowing now that Rishad had likely forced Trixie into a suicidal spell, there is just so much great stuff and here now it's already over. I loved it! I certainly hope you continue. Ponies or not, I would love more of your work.
I guess my question is do you mean you will be releasing this story in an original form outside fanfiction? That would give a lot of room to go further with what was left hanging here.
3523527 glad to have a fan in you.
To answer that question.
Yes.
I'm currently working on the rest of the story,
Together with what I already have, in hopes to create something book worthy.
That of course will give room for all the details I chose to omitt from the current version.
I hope that answered it for you.
Cheers!
Come on, letting the general populace have access to mind control isn't to bad Celestia. Exaggerations, I say. Oh no, someone will have mind control in the series. I have ruined everything for myself. I hope the Saddle-Arabian King doesn't- WHY DO I KEEP RUINING IT FOR MYSELF?
Were the memories of Rishad passed down to Trixie? I mean, it certainly explains the vast knowledge and magical prowess. It also may have had something to do with Trixie's change in attitude, although not as much as herself. If so, how much of Rishad's memories were passed down to Trixie.
Oh Celestia, if this was adapted to plain fiction, I don't know how the entire magic Saddle-Arabian system would work. Maybe it would be similar to Miracles in Dark Souls? Chimes, incantations, the power of the spell being more dependent upon faith than intelligence, at least in Saddle-Arabia. Rishad must have put all his level up points into Faith. That would be a nice conflict in the story. Magic based upon faith and magic based upon logic.
I hope your story becomes published some day! Who knows, maybe it will even be a timeless classic (to be decided when we are long dead of course).
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Well, to answer that simply.
No memories were given to Trixie, at all.
Rishad gave of his heart to Moxie, his memories from she was just a foal.
And why he felt such a strong connection to her.
To Trixie he gave his knowledge of the old language in Saddla-Arabia. How their magic worked, and most importantly: he planted a seed within her.
Rishad was willing to give everything to save Moxie, and he would not stop at anything to complete his task.
He transferred this need to Trixie, so that regardless of her wishes she would do what Rishad set out to do.
I wanted this to show in Trixie after that night as well.
A hesitation and fear within her, yet a need to keeps her going through with what Rishad wishes for.
It is this synergy of the Saddle-Arabian magic that Celestia fears, imagine if someone like Twilight understood this power completely?
I hope this answered your question.
I'm happy you liked the story.
Cheers!
when you start writing this series again, will you leave a link or some way for use to find it so that we can continue reading your awesome work? PS I absolutely love your work, it's one of the best-written work I've read