Rewrites and chapters · 8:59pm Oct 8th, 2015
Righty, almost done with my rewrite of My Little Panzers prologue. I wasn't really happy with it, it felt rushed and not particularly well finished. I was eager to get it started and the result wasn't that great. So, I finally sat down a rewrote it. Well, the second half mostly, but it reads a whole lot better I think, not trying to cram so much information in there this time around, leaves me with more to work with later on.
Also, Chapter 1, The Curious Past Times of Bald Apes From Another Dimension, is almost ready. Taken me ages. Again, I was never really happy with it, and I'd rather take a while and get it right than rush again and turn out something I didn't actually like that much. Plus there was a writing challenge from the School For New Writers involving Discord, so I'm working on a version with him shoe horned in there. But he may have to wait for a later chapter before making a full appearance.
Anyways, enough dallying, I must get back to writing!
Oh, and a quick edit, I've managed to paint up a T-34/85 (1/56 scale model, not an actual T-34/85, which would have been much cooler...) in an afternoon! Which was nice. Even managed to paint 'Little Harmony' on the side in what Google assures me is Russian.
